3254: Love NEver Dies - KaylreForver2pmHottest
How do you feel about deleting reviews. (It came up in the search and while it wasn't what I was looking for the thread perked my intrest.
TITLE: Love Never Dies
PERPETRATOR: Kay1reForever2pmHottest
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: It was a very painful cover. Can you guys figure it out?
SUMMARY:”This is my first HP FF so please less the negative comments: Harry has a younger twin whom they thought to be the BWL but that's should Harry. Because of that his mother neglected him and that made his father the only one who care for him. When they were 3, Harry's parents divorced and James took Harry with him and moved to France. What will happen if they met again after so long?”
FULL NAME: Harrison Jamienne Potter, Hayden Potter, Kathie Zabini, Drake Black
SPECIES: Their twins of course
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: Some how Harry ended up falling 200 feet because of Dementors... and it has something to do with Sirius escaping. He is thus in the Beauxbaton's Hospital Wing. Suddenly he, Mr. Black (who?), Mr and Mrs. Weasley, Ms. Zabini (who?) “are chosen to have a chance to participate in the Twiwizard Tournament” so they get to go to Hogwarts. A Drake and Kathie are participating as well. Dumbledore is busy training Hayden. Drake turns out to be “Draco Abraxas Black”. Dumbledore announces that the five fight the darkside... and Mr. Zabini says it is supposed to be Hayden's job.
ORIGIN: They somehow mistook Harry's twin as being the one who lived and then Lily decides to favor said child and thus she and James end up getting divorced. Harry is going to Beauxbatons instead of Hogwarts. James is a professor there and Head Professor.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Harry, Ginny and Ron are all at Beauxbatons rather then Hogwarts. Apparently in addition to the Headmistress position there is a Head Professor position that belongs to James. “Now, these 5 are the only ones qualified to be the underage students participating the tournament, they had made contact with Death ever since they're 11. These children had fought Death Eaters and had put them in Azkaban when they are just 11 and fought kinds of monstrous creaters when the're 12 and last year these kids had fought a werewolf named Greyback and they are the Ministry's helper to fight the dark side.” Ginny is Harry's fiance.
NOTES: The plot is far from original. There is also a Lyra Evangeline Malfoy running around. I may need help with tags on this one. I hope I got all of them, but I'm not sure.
SAMPLE:
"Harrison Jamienne Potter!" James exclaimed angrily. "What the hell, Champ"
"Sorry Dad" Harry said as he lay in one of the beds of Beauxbatons' Hospital Wing with a broken wrist and a bandage in his forehead.
"You should be and why the hell would you fall from 200 feet?!" James asked angrily. Of' course he's angry, he's too protective of Harry not because he's his heir but he's his "only" son now and he loves Harry very much.
"The Dementors, Dad. The freaking Dementors cornered me and why the hell would they do that? I'm not connected with someone who escaped from Azkaban" Harry said.
"You're right. I'm sorry, Champ, I just don't want you to be hurt like this" James said.
"It's okay Dad, I know you" Harry said as he smiled at his father.
"But why would the Dementors go near you?" James asked.
"I don't know, I'm not related to You-Know-Who, if anyone should be, it should be the "Boy-Who-Lived-To-Be-Spoiled-By-The-Wizarding-World" right, Dad?" Harry said.
"Harry, don't talk about the kid like that" James said. He didn't tell Harry about Hayden being Harry's younger twin.
"Sorry" Harry said. "But I'm wondering where did I have this scar? It had been on my forehead as long as I can remember"
"In an accident where there's a spell that hit you and it left a scar" James said. He didn't lie, Voldemort used a spell to kill the two but it failed and well it left them a scar.
"Oh, by the way, Dad, do you still Mom and you to go back together?" Harry asked. He knows James and Lily were divorce when he was 3.
"Yes, I always want us to be together but it's already 11 years and she already moved on" James said.
"Don't worry, Dad, I'll always be here for you" Harry assured James.
"Thanks buddy" James said.
TITLE: Love Never Dies
PERPETRATOR: Kay1reForever2pmHottest
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: It was a very painful cover. Can you guys figure it out?
SUMMARY:”This is my first HP FF so please less the negative comments: Harry has a younger twin whom they thought to be the BWL but that's should Harry. Because of that his mother neglected him and that made his father the only one who care for him. When they were 3, Harry's parents divorced and James took Harry with him and moved to France. What will happen if they met again after so long?”
FULL NAME: Harrison Jamienne Potter, Hayden Potter, Kathie Zabini, Drake Black
SPECIES: Their twins of course
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: Some how Harry ended up falling 200 feet because of Dementors... and it has something to do with Sirius escaping. He is thus in the Beauxbaton's Hospital Wing. Suddenly he, Mr. Black (who?), Mr and Mrs. Weasley, Ms. Zabini (who?) “are chosen to have a chance to participate in the Twiwizard Tournament” so they get to go to Hogwarts. A Drake and Kathie are participating as well. Dumbledore is busy training Hayden. Drake turns out to be “Draco Abraxas Black”. Dumbledore announces that the five fight the darkside... and Mr. Zabini says it is supposed to be Hayden's job.
ORIGIN: They somehow mistook Harry's twin as being the one who lived and then Lily decides to favor said child and thus she and James end up getting divorced. Harry is going to Beauxbatons instead of Hogwarts. James is a professor there and Head Professor.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Harry, Ginny and Ron are all at Beauxbatons rather then Hogwarts. Apparently in addition to the Headmistress position there is a Head Professor position that belongs to James. “Now, these 5 are the only ones qualified to be the underage students participating the tournament, they had made contact with Death ever since they're 11. These children had fought Death Eaters and had put them in Azkaban when they are just 11 and fought kinds of monstrous creaters when the're 12 and last year these kids had fought a werewolf named Greyback and they are the Ministry's helper to fight the dark side.” Ginny is Harry's fiance.
NOTES: The plot is far from original. There is also a Lyra Evangeline Malfoy running around. I may need help with tags on this one. I hope I got all of them, but I'm not sure.
SAMPLE:
"Harrison Jamienne Potter!" James exclaimed angrily. "What the hell, Champ"
"Sorry Dad" Harry said as he lay in one of the beds of Beauxbatons' Hospital Wing with a broken wrist and a bandage in his forehead.
"You should be and why the hell would you fall from 200 feet?!" James asked angrily. Of' course he's angry, he's too protective of Harry not because he's his heir but he's his "only" son now and he loves Harry very much.
"The Dementors, Dad. The freaking Dementors cornered me and why the hell would they do that? I'm not connected with someone who escaped from Azkaban" Harry said.
"You're right. I'm sorry, Champ, I just don't want you to be hurt like this" James said.
"It's okay Dad, I know you" Harry said as he smiled at his father.
"But why would the Dementors go near you?" James asked.
"I don't know, I'm not related to You-Know-Who, if anyone should be, it should be the "Boy-Who-Lived-To-Be-Spoiled-By-The-Wizarding-World" right, Dad?" Harry said.
"Harry, don't talk about the kid like that" James said. He didn't tell Harry about Hayden being Harry's younger twin.
"Sorry" Harry said. "But I'm wondering where did I have this scar? It had been on my forehead as long as I can remember"
"In an accident where there's a spell that hit you and it left a scar" James said. He didn't lie, Voldemort used a spell to kill the two but it failed and well it left them a scar.
"Oh, by the way, Dad, do you still Mom and you to go back together?" Harry asked. He knows James and Lily were divorce when he was 3.
"Yes, I always want us to be together but it's already 11 years and she already moved on" James said.
"Don't worry, Dad, I'll always be here for you" Harry assured James.
"Thanks buddy" James said.