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This fic stood out because of the summary. “This is a story about Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter's Twin Sister. Despite the fact they added in Draco as a character they didn't add in the OC tag.
TITLE: Love of Hate
PERPETRATOR: staystrong203
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
COVER/BANNER ART: A photo of a girl.
FULL NAME: Katherine Potter, Evelyn Granger and Avalon Malfoy
SPECIES: They're the twins of Harry, Hermione and Draco. (Well, Avalon may not be Draco's twin but the writer doesn't bother to really make that clear either.)
HAIR: Katherin has “black hair almost brown”.
EYES:
MARKINGS: “[Evelyn] has a long curly brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. She is very smart and doesn't do crazy things if me or Avalon don't make her.” “[Avalon] has long straight blonde hair and gray eyes.”
POSSESSIONS: Katherine has “purple T-Shirt with skinny jeans and black sneakers.” “She has long straight blonde hair and gray eyes.” “I walked with Avalon and and Morgan were black were dressed with black dresses and one of there clumps were black.I was with black skinny tight jeans,black boots and dark purple vampire teeth.”
CONNECTION TO CANON: Katherine gets her letter. We find out she isn't eleven years of age but seventeen. Her friends tell her that Draco is of course going to try and hurt her feelings. We then deal with them showering and has to deal with Pansy. Forth chapter has them kissing, Draco and Katherine that is. They kiss again in chapter five. In chapter six she has to deal with the fact Draco is having to go to the ball with “Pansy pig-face Parkinson”. Later they talk about Halloween costumes and how they get to “go to the human world without being scared that they will think that we're not with costumes”. Story pretty much goes nowhere.
ORIGIN: She lives with her aunt Sophia instead of her aunt Petunia. She then meets Draco after getting sorted into Slytherin.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: We have the second part of three sets of twins. They all three know each other despite the fact they shouldn't know each other.
NOTES: On top of the fact we may have a young Suethor the Suethor is also from Bulgaria. On their profile it says... “Everyone will say that Draco is a bad person he's not.” I'd like to see how this writer eventually grows.
SAMPLE:
I was a normal teenager.. I was normal.. I had a normal life.. Until I learned the truth.. My name is Katherine Potter. The twin sister of Harry Potter or "The Chosen One". I lived with my aunt Sophia, she isn't my real aunt but I love her like my family. I learned that I was going to Hogwarts School Of Witchcraft And Wizardry but gladly I'm going to be with my two best friends - Evelyn Granger and Avalon Malfoy.
Evelyn is on my age like Avalon and she is the twin sister of Hermione Granger. Evelyn is really sweet and kind. She has a long curly brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. She is very smart and doesn't do crazy things if me or Avalon don't make her.
Avalon is the opposite of Evelyn. I don't know how she is in school but Avalon is really crazy and even makes me do things that I get grounded. She has long straight blonde hair and gray eyes. I don't exactly know her family but I know her family is really rich and she has a brother named Draco Malfoy.
So let's get to the place where I am traveling to my new school.
TITLE: Love of Hate
PERPETRATOR: staystrong203
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
COVER/BANNER ART: A photo of a girl.
FULL NAME: Katherine Potter, Evelyn Granger and Avalon Malfoy
SPECIES: They're the twins of Harry, Hermione and Draco. (Well, Avalon may not be Draco's twin but the writer doesn't bother to really make that clear either.)
HAIR: Katherin has “black hair almost brown”.
EYES:
MARKINGS: “[Evelyn] has a long curly brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. She is very smart and doesn't do crazy things if me or Avalon don't make her.” “[Avalon] has long straight blonde hair and gray eyes.”
POSSESSIONS: Katherine has “purple T-Shirt with skinny jeans and black sneakers.” “She has long straight blonde hair and gray eyes.” “I walked with Avalon and and Morgan were black were dressed with black dresses and one of there clumps were black.I was with black skinny tight jeans,black boots and dark purple vampire teeth.”
CONNECTION TO CANON: Katherine gets her letter. We find out she isn't eleven years of age but seventeen. Her friends tell her that Draco is of course going to try and hurt her feelings. We then deal with them showering and has to deal with Pansy. Forth chapter has them kissing, Draco and Katherine that is. They kiss again in chapter five. In chapter six she has to deal with the fact Draco is having to go to the ball with “Pansy pig-face Parkinson”. Later they talk about Halloween costumes and how they get to “go to the human world without being scared that they will think that we're not with costumes”. Story pretty much goes nowhere.
ORIGIN: She lives with her aunt Sophia instead of her aunt Petunia. She then meets Draco after getting sorted into Slytherin.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: We have the second part of three sets of twins. They all three know each other despite the fact they shouldn't know each other.
NOTES: On top of the fact we may have a young Suethor the Suethor is also from Bulgaria. On their profile it says... “Everyone will say that Draco is a bad person he's not.” I'd like to see how this writer eventually grows.
SAMPLE:
I was a normal teenager.. I was normal.. I had a normal life.. Until I learned the truth.. My name is Katherine Potter. The twin sister of Harry Potter or "The Chosen One". I lived with my aunt Sophia, she isn't my real aunt but I love her like my family. I learned that I was going to Hogwarts School Of Witchcraft And Wizardry but gladly I'm going to be with my two best friends - Evelyn Granger and Avalon Malfoy.
Evelyn is on my age like Avalon and she is the twin sister of Hermione Granger. Evelyn is really sweet and kind. She has a long curly brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. She is very smart and doesn't do crazy things if me or Avalon don't make her.
Avalon is the opposite of Evelyn. I don't know how she is in school but Avalon is really crazy and even makes me do things that I get grounded. She has long straight blonde hair and gray eyes. I don't exactly know her family but I know her family is really rich and she has a brother named Draco Malfoy.
So let's get to the place where I am traveling to my new school.