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Here is day two of “all in the summary” week. Also, today we managed to have two sues named in the summary.
TITLE: Hogwarts Cinderella
PERPETRATOR: nerdySoHa
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: A photoshoped collage of sorts that contains the title of the fic.
FULL NAME: Anastasia “Ana” Malfoy as well as Annika Malfoy
SPECIES: She's a fairy tale princess who is going to be rescued by her fairy godfather and prince Harry... (not the real Prince Harry mind you)... while Annika is Draco's real little sister.
HAIR: Annika has “long white-blonde curls”
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: “[Annika] looked like the epitome of perfection even when she had done nothing...” and her dress “constrasted with her pale complexion and blemish-free skin.”
POSSESSIONS: “[Annika] had a plain, blood-red, silk gown on that had a round neck and reached her ankles.”
CONNECTION TO CANON: She was adopted to be the Malfoy's human slave. It takes place their forth year, but Dobby still seems to be under the control of the Malfoy family despite the events of the second book.
ORIGIN: “Meet Anastasia, adopted when she was 7 years old. Having no family name, she was named after her foster family, the Malfoys. Along with adoption, came foster parents and foster siblings: Draco and Annika Malfoy. She is Cinderella. Who is Prince Charming? And why does she feel as if everything is about to change? She finds out exactly what as she goes to Hogwarts for Year 4! “
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She is pretty much lower then a House Elf. She's also good friends with Dobby. More then that he pretty much becomes her Fairy Godmother so to speak.
NOTES: Don't use a nickname that can be used for more then one character. Also... I don't sympathize with Anastasia simply because this story is a copy of Harry Potter's storyline with no changes made to actually adapt the fairy tale to HP canon. Actually, I think this version is very much like another version I've heard, but I can't place which one. Also, while Annika is described in the story Anastasia is not.
SAMPLE:
Ana picked up the bucket of dirty soap water and the wet rag from the freshly cleaned floors, and walked out of the living room into the kitchen, which she also referred to as her bedroom. After getting rid of the barely clean rag and the water, she placed the now empty bucket below the huge sink and wiped her hands with the towel she had conveniently hung beside it before-hand. Glancing around the huge silver and emerald themed kitchen, like the rest of the manor, she walked out and hurried to the dining room where her foster family, namely the Malfoys, had almost finished their breakfast.
She had grown quite accustomed to calling the Malfoy Manor her 'home' when in reality it was nothing more than a workplace for her where her employers gave her a bed to sleep and some food that barely kept her alive, at least while she wasn't at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Her employers in this case were her foster parents; Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy, who made her work without any payment. Though, she did not quite understand why the Malfoys had adopted her, six years ago, in the first place if all they wanted was a human slave. It did not make sense, as they already had plenty of house elves and help that could do all their household chores and also ran outside errands.
When this family of purebloods had come to the orphanage she had lived at, they seemed very sweet and caring, but later it turned out that it was all for show... Reality was that they wanted a puppet who would dance whenever they wanted and in every way they wanted it to. It was a method to make them look good in front of the Ministry of Magic, knowing that their history of involvement with Lord Voldemort did little to prevent them from public humiliation, anyway.
Ana picked up the bucket of dirty soap water and the wet rag from the freshly cleaned floors, and walked out of the living room into the kitchen, which she also referred to as her bedroom. After getting rid of the barely clean rag and the water, she placed the now empty bucket below the huge sink and wiped her hands with the towel she had conveniently hung beside it before-hand. Glancing around the huge silver and emerald themed kitchen, like the rest of the manor, she walked out and hurried to the dining room where her foster family, namely the Malfoys, had almost finished their breakfast.
She had grown quite accustomed to calling the Malfoy Manor her 'home' when in reality it was nothing more than a workplace for her where her employers gave her a bed to sleep and some food that barely kept her alive, at least while she wasn't at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Her employers in this case were her foster parents; Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy, who made her work without any payment. Though, she did not quite understand why the Malfoys had adopted her, six years ago, in the first place if all they wanted was a human slave. It did not make sense, as they already had plenty of house elves and help that could do all their household chores and also ran outside errands.
When this family of purebloods had come to the orphanage she had lived at, they seemed very sweet and caring, but later it turned out that it was all for show... Reality was that they wanted a puppet who would dance whenever they wanted and in every way they wanted it to. It was a method to make them look good in front of the Ministry of Magic, knowing that their history of involvement with Lord Voldemort did little to prevent them from public humiliation, anyway.
TITLE: Hogwarts Cinderella
PERPETRATOR: nerdySoHa
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: A photoshoped collage of sorts that contains the title of the fic.
FULL NAME: Anastasia “Ana” Malfoy as well as Annika Malfoy
SPECIES: She's a fairy tale princess who is going to be rescued by her fairy godfather and prince Harry... (not the real Prince Harry mind you)... while Annika is Draco's real little sister.
HAIR: Annika has “long white-blonde curls”
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: “[Annika] looked like the epitome of perfection even when she had done nothing...” and her dress “constrasted with her pale complexion and blemish-free skin.”
POSSESSIONS: “[Annika] had a plain, blood-red, silk gown on that had a round neck and reached her ankles.”
CONNECTION TO CANON: She was adopted to be the Malfoy's human slave. It takes place their forth year, but Dobby still seems to be under the control of the Malfoy family despite the events of the second book.
ORIGIN: “Meet Anastasia, adopted when she was 7 years old. Having no family name, she was named after her foster family, the Malfoys. Along with adoption, came foster parents and foster siblings: Draco and Annika Malfoy. She is Cinderella. Who is Prince Charming? And why does she feel as if everything is about to change? She finds out exactly what as she goes to Hogwarts for Year 4! “
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She is pretty much lower then a House Elf. She's also good friends with Dobby. More then that he pretty much becomes her Fairy Godmother so to speak.
NOTES: Don't use a nickname that can be used for more then one character. Also... I don't sympathize with Anastasia simply because this story is a copy of Harry Potter's storyline with no changes made to actually adapt the fairy tale to HP canon. Actually, I think this version is very much like another version I've heard, but I can't place which one. Also, while Annika is described in the story Anastasia is not.
SAMPLE:
Ana picked up the bucket of dirty soap water and the wet rag from the freshly cleaned floors, and walked out of the living room into the kitchen, which she also referred to as her bedroom. After getting rid of the barely clean rag and the water, she placed the now empty bucket below the huge sink and wiped her hands with the towel she had conveniently hung beside it before-hand. Glancing around the huge silver and emerald themed kitchen, like the rest of the manor, she walked out and hurried to the dining room where her foster family, namely the Malfoys, had almost finished their breakfast.
She had grown quite accustomed to calling the Malfoy Manor her 'home' when in reality it was nothing more than a workplace for her where her employers gave her a bed to sleep and some food that barely kept her alive, at least while she wasn't at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Her employers in this case were her foster parents; Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy, who made her work without any payment. Though, she did not quite understand why the Malfoys had adopted her, six years ago, in the first place if all they wanted was a human slave. It did not make sense, as they already had plenty of house elves and help that could do all their household chores and also ran outside errands.
When this family of purebloods had come to the orphanage she had lived at, they seemed very sweet and caring, but later it turned out that it was all for show... Reality was that they wanted a puppet who would dance whenever they wanted and in every way they wanted it to. It was a method to make them look good in front of the Ministry of Magic, knowing that their history of involvement with Lord Voldemort did little to prevent them from public humiliation, anyway.
Ana picked up the bucket of dirty soap water and the wet rag from the freshly cleaned floors, and walked out of the living room into the kitchen, which she also referred to as her bedroom. After getting rid of the barely clean rag and the water, she placed the now empty bucket below the huge sink and wiped her hands with the towel she had conveniently hung beside it before-hand. Glancing around the huge silver and emerald themed kitchen, like the rest of the manor, she walked out and hurried to the dining room where her foster family, namely the Malfoys, had almost finished their breakfast.
She had grown quite accustomed to calling the Malfoy Manor her 'home' when in reality it was nothing more than a workplace for her where her employers gave her a bed to sleep and some food that barely kept her alive, at least while she wasn't at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Her employers in this case were her foster parents; Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy, who made her work without any payment. Though, she did not quite understand why the Malfoys had adopted her, six years ago, in the first place if all they wanted was a human slave. It did not make sense, as they already had plenty of house elves and help that could do all their household chores and also ran outside errands.
When this family of purebloods had come to the orphanage she had lived at, they seemed very sweet and caring, but later it turned out that it was all for show... Reality was that they wanted a puppet who would dance whenever they wanted and in every way they wanted it to. It was a method to make them look good in front of the Ministry of Magic, knowing that their history of involvement with Lord Voldemort did little to prevent them from public humiliation, anyway.