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TITLE: His And Hers
PERPETRATOR: SkittleBloom
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
FULL NAME: Daisy Summers *groan*
SPECIES: Witch, part-werewolf
HAIR: "long, wavy, chocolatey hair,"
EYES: "blazing with fire", "flecks of amber", "large soft grey eyes".
MARKINGS: "beautiful", "stunning", "Daisy wasn't large - there wasn't a drop of fat on her body, she was just gifted with sensuously curvy hips and large breasts.", "Her muscles were tightly toned and she was always dusted with a soft tan", yet it is also described as "porcelain skin". She has "high cheekbones and perfect, full lips",
POSSESSIONS: "cotton pyjama shorts and thin camisole",
ORIGIN: Lives with her dad, a wizard, on a farm. Her muggle-born mother has passed away. Transfers to Hogwarts from Beauxbatons in sixth year.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Is on the Hogwarts Express. Is frightened when the Marauders barge into her compartment. She stuns Sirius, but Remus mesmerized by her, speaks to her in a rational way. She agrees to share her compartment with them. Sirius recovers and tries to flirt with her, which she ignores. She is interested in Remus, because he was able to calm her down, which normally only her dad can do. Sirius' latest conquest comes in and insults Daisy, so Daisy attacks her like an animal. Remus is besotted, and declares her "his" to his friends.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Likes to go for a run. I'm sure she has some werewolf blood in her somewhere, but it's not yet confirmed.
NOTES: How could anyone find a temper like that appealing? I wouldn't want to be around her if she stuns people quickly, and attacks people over verbal insults.
This Suethor would like a beta, as well.
SAMPLE:
"So Daisy, how come I've not noticed a stunner like you around here before?" He murmured, draping his arm around her petite frame.
"I'm a transfer student," she replied some what distractedly, "Until last May I used to go to Beauxbatons."
As if on cue, the carriage door slammed open and Daisy looked up to immeasurable malice pouring from the eyes of a pretty blond girl with a slim, streamline frame Daisy would kill for. Daisy wasn't large - there wasn't a drop of fat on her body, she was just gifted with sensuously curvy hips and large breasts. This had unfortunately drawn the attention of young boys and jealousy of young girls. Her muscles were tightly toned and she was always dusted with a soft tan from spending each day of her summer outside.
"Siri! Baby?" The blonde girl whined "I thought you said the train was for "Guy Time"? You said girls weren't allowed in your carriage, ever." She said, her spiteful eyes flicking from Daisy to Sirius and back again.
"Emma, sweetheart..." Sirius began.
"Alice." Remus not so subtly coughed under his breath, as the rest of the marauders and Daisy stifled their laughter.
"Right, right, Alice," Sirius corrected, "firstly, my name is Sirius. Never has it been, nor will it ever be, 'Siri'. Secondly, Daisy here isn't in our compartment, we are in hers." He smirked, as if the explanation was simple.
Alice glared at Daisy, looked her up and down, then shrugged nonchalantly as she turned back to Sirius.
"I don't care. To be honest, I know we're not exclusive, but I really didn't think you liked your girls fat!" She replied viciously, eyes turning to Daisy on the last word.
Before anyone had time to react, Alice was slammed back into the corridor and slid to the ground with Daisy on top of her as she pummelled the girls face with her fists. As their shock wore off, James and Remus jumped up and pulled Daisy off of the girl, pushing her back into the carriage. There was deathly silence as Alice's friends helped her to her feet while wiping the blood off her face. Once on her feet, the two girls eyes met.
" Don't ever call me fat again, bitch!" Daisy spat, then turned around and sat back in her seat, eerily calm.
"I think you girls better go." James prompted and the hallway outside cleared.
As the door to the carriage slid to a close, all four marauders turned and cast their eyes upon Daisy, waiting.
Never in his life had Remus Lupin seen anything as infinitely sexy, yet truly scary, as Daisy attacking Alice. He didn't feel bad for the Ravenclaw girl, he couldn't stand the ring leader or Sirius's fan club. He found it scary because he had never witnessed anything quite as animalistic from another human being. The anger in her eyes and the flecks of amber which had disappeared as quickly as they had come, reminded him alarmingly of how his eyes went just before a full moon. The thought almost made him laugh out loud, as if anything as sinister and evil could be that beautiful and fragile.
The more he looked at her, though he tried in vain not to, the more he realised it was only a matter of time before she became another one of Sirius' conquests. James had been in love with Lily since third year and he was pretty sure that he was more Peter's type than Daisy seemed to be.
To Remus' intense embarrassment, Daisy had caught him staring a couple of times. He would get lost in her porcelain skin, long, wavy, chocolatey hair, her high cheekbones and perfect, full lips. As he looked at her, he decided that full seemed to be a very fitting word for Daisy. Everything was very full, as if to maximum capacity, about her. Her temper was evidently powerful and blazing. Her large soft grey eyes promised a warmth and caring nature that surpassed any other he had known, and her appearance was honestly stunning.
Daisy had refused to comment on the incident with Alice and spent the remainder of the train ride staring out of the window. After a while, the boys informed her it was time to change into their robes and stepped into the hallway to allow her some privacy in the carriage.
"Well Lads, what do you reckon? She's a feisty little one isn't she!" Sirius announced, eyes gleaming with the prospect of a challenge.
A growl formed from deep within Remus' chest. Prongs and Wormtail looked at him, shocked at such a reaction. Padfoot, however, remained blissfully unaware.
"Seriously lads," he smirked at his own pun, "the things I would to make her scre..." He was cut off by a terrifying growl from Remus, one that nobody could ignore or fail to notice.
"She is MINE!" Roared the werewolf, eyes completely amber.
"R-right. Okay, Mooney, no worries! She's er... off limits, got it." Padfoot tripped over his words.
The boys had never seen such a display of ownership from the normally quiet tempered marauder. At that moment the girl in question opened the door into the hallway.
"Thanks guys, I'm done now." She said moving into the corridor and allowing the boys the same privacy.
"Mine." she heard Remus whisper under his breath as the boys piled in to get changed.
TITLE: His And Hers
PERPETRATOR: SkittleBloom
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
FULL NAME: Daisy Summers *groan*
SPECIES: Witch, part-werewolf
HAIR: "long, wavy, chocolatey hair,"
EYES: "blazing with fire", "flecks of amber", "large soft grey eyes".
MARKINGS: "beautiful", "stunning", "Daisy wasn't large - there wasn't a drop of fat on her body, she was just gifted with sensuously curvy hips and large breasts.", "Her muscles were tightly toned and she was always dusted with a soft tan", yet it is also described as "porcelain skin". She has "high cheekbones and perfect, full lips",
POSSESSIONS: "cotton pyjama shorts and thin camisole",
ORIGIN: Lives with her dad, a wizard, on a farm. Her muggle-born mother has passed away. Transfers to Hogwarts from Beauxbatons in sixth year.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Is on the Hogwarts Express. Is frightened when the Marauders barge into her compartment. She stuns Sirius, but Remus mesmerized by her, speaks to her in a rational way. She agrees to share her compartment with them. Sirius recovers and tries to flirt with her, which she ignores. She is interested in Remus, because he was able to calm her down, which normally only her dad can do. Sirius' latest conquest comes in and insults Daisy, so Daisy attacks her like an animal. Remus is besotted, and declares her "his" to his friends.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Likes to go for a run. I'm sure she has some werewolf blood in her somewhere, but it's not yet confirmed.
NOTES: How could anyone find a temper like that appealing? I wouldn't want to be around her if she stuns people quickly, and attacks people over verbal insults.
This Suethor would like a beta, as well.
SAMPLE:
"So Daisy, how come I've not noticed a stunner like you around here before?" He murmured, draping his arm around her petite frame.
"I'm a transfer student," she replied some what distractedly, "Until last May I used to go to Beauxbatons."
As if on cue, the carriage door slammed open and Daisy looked up to immeasurable malice pouring from the eyes of a pretty blond girl with a slim, streamline frame Daisy would kill for. Daisy wasn't large - there wasn't a drop of fat on her body, she was just gifted with sensuously curvy hips and large breasts. This had unfortunately drawn the attention of young boys and jealousy of young girls. Her muscles were tightly toned and she was always dusted with a soft tan from spending each day of her summer outside.
"Siri! Baby?" The blonde girl whined "I thought you said the train was for "Guy Time"? You said girls weren't allowed in your carriage, ever." She said, her spiteful eyes flicking from Daisy to Sirius and back again.
"Emma, sweetheart..." Sirius began.
"Alice." Remus not so subtly coughed under his breath, as the rest of the marauders and Daisy stifled their laughter.
"Right, right, Alice," Sirius corrected, "firstly, my name is Sirius. Never has it been, nor will it ever be, 'Siri'. Secondly, Daisy here isn't in our compartment, we are in hers." He smirked, as if the explanation was simple.
Alice glared at Daisy, looked her up and down, then shrugged nonchalantly as she turned back to Sirius.
"I don't care. To be honest, I know we're not exclusive, but I really didn't think you liked your girls fat!" She replied viciously, eyes turning to Daisy on the last word.
Before anyone had time to react, Alice was slammed back into the corridor and slid to the ground with Daisy on top of her as she pummelled the girls face with her fists. As their shock wore off, James and Remus jumped up and pulled Daisy off of the girl, pushing her back into the carriage. There was deathly silence as Alice's friends helped her to her feet while wiping the blood off her face. Once on her feet, the two girls eyes met.
" Don't ever call me fat again, bitch!" Daisy spat, then turned around and sat back in her seat, eerily calm.
"I think you girls better go." James prompted and the hallway outside cleared.
As the door to the carriage slid to a close, all four marauders turned and cast their eyes upon Daisy, waiting.
Never in his life had Remus Lupin seen anything as infinitely sexy, yet truly scary, as Daisy attacking Alice. He didn't feel bad for the Ravenclaw girl, he couldn't stand the ring leader or Sirius's fan club. He found it scary because he had never witnessed anything quite as animalistic from another human being. The anger in her eyes and the flecks of amber which had disappeared as quickly as they had come, reminded him alarmingly of how his eyes went just before a full moon. The thought almost made him laugh out loud, as if anything as sinister and evil could be that beautiful and fragile.
The more he looked at her, though he tried in vain not to, the more he realised it was only a matter of time before she became another one of Sirius' conquests. James had been in love with Lily since third year and he was pretty sure that he was more Peter's type than Daisy seemed to be.
To Remus' intense embarrassment, Daisy had caught him staring a couple of times. He would get lost in her porcelain skin, long, wavy, chocolatey hair, her high cheekbones and perfect, full lips. As he looked at her, he decided that full seemed to be a very fitting word for Daisy. Everything was very full, as if to maximum capacity, about her. Her temper was evidently powerful and blazing. Her large soft grey eyes promised a warmth and caring nature that surpassed any other he had known, and her appearance was honestly stunning.
Daisy had refused to comment on the incident with Alice and spent the remainder of the train ride staring out of the window. After a while, the boys informed her it was time to change into their robes and stepped into the hallway to allow her some privacy in the carriage.
"Well Lads, what do you reckon? She's a feisty little one isn't she!" Sirius announced, eyes gleaming with the prospect of a challenge.
A growl formed from deep within Remus' chest. Prongs and Wormtail looked at him, shocked at such a reaction. Padfoot, however, remained blissfully unaware.
"Seriously lads," he smirked at his own pun, "the things I would to make her scre..." He was cut off by a terrifying growl from Remus, one that nobody could ignore or fail to notice.
"She is MINE!" Roared the werewolf, eyes completely amber.
"R-right. Okay, Mooney, no worries! She's er... off limits, got it." Padfoot tripped over his words.
The boys had never seen such a display of ownership from the normally quiet tempered marauder. At that moment the girl in question opened the door into the hallway.
"Thanks guys, I'm done now." She said moving into the corridor and allowing the boys the same privacy.
"Mine." she heard Remus whisper under his breath as the boys piled in to get changed.