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0014: The Memoirs of Starr Athena LiEngle, Year One - Starr Athena LiEngle

Apr 18, 2003 22:42

In an effort to combat my internet's refusal to get up in the morning, I'm going to start posting Sues late at night.

While I'm here, I would just like to make a note to the world in general of one of my fanfic pet peeves: body-switching. Gah. People, it's old. It's been done. And usually it's not even done well. Stop writing it already, please. ( Read more... )

ntn - star and sky names, pw - woobie/cry for me, ap - athletic pursuit, sw-o - sparklypoos, 0 - wank, rom - draco malfoy, rating - awful, ntb - diary/journal titles, nts - speshul name, ap - academic pursuit, b - unknown hair color, rom - none, pc - parasite sue, y - hogwarts years (1 - ps/ss), rom - oc, ntm - god and goddess names, ntm - god and goddess titles, ntn - star and sky titles, ship - draco/oc, pc - rival, b - unknown eye color, p - first person narrative

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Author's Response anonymous June 1 2003, 16:48:22 UTC

Hello. I am the author of this story (seriously.) Call me Starr ( ... )

Re: Author's Response anonymous June 3 2003, 22:24:32 UTC

What the fuck? -.-;

Hun, your story is so lame, we can't HELP reading it. It's fun to make fun of stupid shits like you. Take your fic and your Mary Sue and shove them both up your ass, please. It'll do the whole world a favor.

Re: Author's Response anonymous June 5 2003, 17:30:37 UTC

Yes, the author again. You know what I like about this? I love making fun of the stupid buttholes who think they're insulting me. It's hilarious how you all think you're funny.

Re: Author's Response anonymous June 8 2003, 10:56:42 UTC

Hehe... I have to go with the author on this one. ~_^ Yeah, it's Mary-Sue, and her story sucks... but at least she admitted it.

Re: Author's Response anonymous January 22 2009, 11:41:16 UTC

someone has a case of hermione envy...
yes we all day dream. some of us don't post our day dreams on the internet. wierd huh?
we never said that every fanfiction author needs to write as well as Rowling. we just think they ought to know better than to write them selves into hogwarts when they know people will insult them about it.
yes we know you got starr by adding an extra "r" to star. that doesn't make it a good, non-sueish name. misspellings of common words are pretty high on the cheesy sue-name scale.

Re: Author's Response yemi_hikari September 28 2010, 20:25:33 UTC

AKA, the whole think before you post.

Re: Author's Response yemi_hikari September 28 2010, 20:24:29 UTC

The thing is, it has to be understood that blatant bashing is frowned upon in fanfiction. People have the right to call you out for that. Also, same with blatant wish fullfillment. There are right ways to do things, and wrong ways. I don't know about the reviews, since the story HAS been deleted, but none of the comments here were truelly idiodic. Are people really dumb, for noticing your fanfic has believability problems.

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