1144: Underneath It All - Isabelle Rey

[pottersues]

By my count, I owe you guys five retroactive Sues. Three from my suspension and two from this weekend where I was too sick to use the computer.

Being too sick to do anything today but watch a scrillion reruns of That 70s Show, I was in the mood for a MWPP Sue.

TITLE: Underneath It All
PERPETRATOR: Lory in Love
SUE-O-METER:

Comments

[carnalsin]

Sirius? Playboy? Wow, original idea!
/sarcasm

[carnalsin]

Wow, I'm first again.

Did everyone else die?

[chrismactaggart]

no, we're just slow XD

[chrismactaggart]

why, why does it have to be in first person?

[lionessvalenti]

I love the Baby-Sitter's Club... but I did always skip chapter two.

[megome]

LOL I can't believe someone else said that! I was thinking the EXACT same thing.

I used to read the one about Kristy's little step-sister, and I swear to GOD-- chapter two was exactly the same, every time. it kills me.

[megome]

ME TOO! Even as a kid that bothered me.

and all the goddamn stupid made up words. like, wtf does gigundoly mean??

haha the more I think about those books, the madder I get.

P.S. I love your Wizard People icon. Absolutely my favorite way to watch HP1 ever.

[captkatsparrow]

I don't understand who's speaking. I don't try to care to understand, quite frankly. :-/

[cherryfeather]

Hmm...not bad. Good writing. Just cliched. Playboy!Sirius and OC best friends hooking up with the Marauders.

I actually did like something about this fic: Peter had lines! I was amazed.

It wasn't puke-worthy--not even gag-worthy, but compared to the horror of yesterday's *NSYNC ripoff, anything would be good. =) Kidding. This was just mildly bad.

[glamour_allure]

Yeah, it was bad. But it was also awesome. ^^

I agree though. This was just too cliched. I hate to see good writers write bad things. It's dissapointing.