5057: 123 slaughter me street Harry's family - Harry Potter, Ghost
Don’t forget about the first bi-annual Pottersues Contest - I’ve extended it to September 5th due to having no entries, but this is replacing the old annual Pottersues Contest. The theme for said contest is Gamer Fic. Since Gamer Fic is a rather new concept in fanfic, I’ve added links to three entries which feature a Gamer Fic. I’m also working on a list of common traits we find in Sue stories which make them Sue stories called More Than Thirteen Reasons Why.
Next on the list is 10th Kingdom, which has only one story which was rather straight forward and from what I can tell not a Gary Stu. So, that leads me 10 123 Slaughter Me Street.
Title: 123 slaughter me street Harry's family
Perpetrator: Ghost the Fox
Sue-O-Meter: Awful
Cover/Banner Art: The author’s avatar is this space of black with a white eye drawn on it in simplified form.
Summary: “Harry was surprised when the Denson family adopted him into their family but worrying things begin to happen who is this silver masked person in their house how is he controlling Harry's older brother Tim and why is he forcing Harry's brother to kill everyone but most important how our Tim's puppets walking on their own "Harry" "mom"”
Full Name: Harry Potter, Ghost
Species: We’ve another Hino.
Hair: n/a
Eyes: n/a
Markings: So, on their profile we have, “almost always wears a dark black hoodie and carrying a shoulder bag {used to keep portals} {half everything you can think of}oh Hunter {left 4 dead}, mew {Pokémon}, Animatronic {five nights at Freddy's}, dragon {Skyrim and others}, and Human” and there is something about them being around “300sh and changeable at will”.
Possessions: Ghost apparently has “He's claws imagine a Hunter from Left 4 Dead claws except with drills at the tips like Nightmare from Five nights at Freddy's”.
Connection to Canon: Harry is adopted from the orphanage by the horror mastermind from the given series and then - well, he’s just tagging along with the existing plot with nothing from the HP universe in these three chapters outside of Harry’s background - hence why this one is a Hino. Third chapter involves an OC of there’s name Ghost showing up
Origin: The story starts off with Harry being dumped at the orphanage and adopted - which, we’ve discussed so many times here on Pottersues why that never makes sense plot wise, yet it’s definitely overused for a story origin.
Special Abilities: Nothing specific.
Notes: So - the writer has sixty-eight stories right now with only four of these stories completed. I suspect the writer is young, for if they’d signed up when they turned thirteen they would have been seventeen when they last updated their profile, which in turn would explain why they list the sexuality for their male character as “?? Female” instead of heterosexual. They could, though, be even younger, given the fact it is possible to create an account when someone is as young as - well, young enough to use the internet without their parent realizing, which also seems to be getting younger and younger these days.
Sample:
Harry Potter was once again standing with a group of other kids in a line you see Harry was one kid in a hundred that was in a orphanage and what's more he has also been there for six years and already hated the place you see Harry's old family had left him as a baby here they didn't even leave anything about themselves all Harry knew was that his parents were dead and that his name was Harry Potter and his birthday that's it nothing else not how his parents died or why his Uncle and aunt had left him there the only thing he had was his baby blanket that had some animal pictures with what he had to guess was his family's nicknames underneath but even still Harry didn't know much about his family
But maybe he would get a new one some of the older kids had commented that he might get adopted faster because of the fact that he was pretty young even if he was 6 years old and also seeing as he was the youngest there but even still the family that came today didn't choose him instead a little girl was picked and slumping a bit Harry followed the rest of the kids to the playground outside and quickly Harry sat down where he usually did he was almost underneath a bridge and turning Harry watched the other kids climbing on the playground equipment while the older kids watched the younger ones and Harry had to admit whoever stated that orphanages were evil never saw this place it was pretty good, plenty of stuff for the orphans to do speaking of which Harry looked down at his art pad he had after chatting with the orphanages art teacher he had found that he liked drawing and after a bit at his last birthday the teacher had given Harry a art book and he was busy drawing something at the moment he was drawing two eyes and quickly Harry pulled out a dark blue colored pencil and started coloring in the eyes when he heard something and looking up Harry watched as something small and blue landed in his arms and looking down Harry found some kind of puppet it looked to be some kind of bird with a large plastic beak but what was surprising was the blue fur that colored the small puppet although it looked like it was missing pieces
"Oh hey good catch" someone said and looking up Harry saw a tall black haired man looking down at him from the bridge with his Basel blue eyes
"Hey kid mind sending me back the puppet I still haven't finished it" the man asked and nodding Harry pointed towards the doors
"Sure thing mister why don't you meet me by the front door" Harry said and nodding the man started walking away from the edge and seemed to be talking to some people and quickly Harry went and after talking to one of the orphanage workers he and another worker went towards the door only to find the man with three other people waiting at the door
Next on the list is 10th Kingdom, which has only one story which was rather straight forward and from what I can tell not a Gary Stu. So, that leads me 10 123 Slaughter Me Street.
Title: 123 slaughter me street Harry's family
Perpetrator: Ghost the Fox
Sue-O-Meter: Awful
Cover/Banner Art: The author’s avatar is this space of black with a white eye drawn on it in simplified form.
Summary: “Harry was surprised when the Denson family adopted him into their family but worrying things begin to happen who is this silver masked person in their house how is he controlling Harry's older brother Tim and why is he forcing Harry's brother to kill everyone but most important how our Tim's puppets walking on their own "Harry" "mom"”
Full Name: Harry Potter, Ghost
Species: We’ve another Hino.
Hair: n/a
Eyes: n/a
Markings: So, on their profile we have, “almost always wears a dark black hoodie and carrying a shoulder bag {used to keep portals} {half everything you can think of}oh Hunter {left 4 dead}, mew {Pokémon}, Animatronic {five nights at Freddy's}, dragon {Skyrim and others}, and Human” and there is something about them being around “300sh and changeable at will”.
Possessions: Ghost apparently has “He's claws imagine a Hunter from Left 4 Dead claws except with drills at the tips like Nightmare from Five nights at Freddy's”.
Connection to Canon: Harry is adopted from the orphanage by the horror mastermind from the given series and then - well, he’s just tagging along with the existing plot with nothing from the HP universe in these three chapters outside of Harry’s background - hence why this one is a Hino. Third chapter involves an OC of there’s name Ghost showing up
Origin: The story starts off with Harry being dumped at the orphanage and adopted - which, we’ve discussed so many times here on Pottersues why that never makes sense plot wise, yet it’s definitely overused for a story origin.
Special Abilities: Nothing specific.
Notes: So - the writer has sixty-eight stories right now with only four of these stories completed. I suspect the writer is young, for if they’d signed up when they turned thirteen they would have been seventeen when they last updated their profile, which in turn would explain why they list the sexuality for their male character as “?? Female” instead of heterosexual. They could, though, be even younger, given the fact it is possible to create an account when someone is as young as - well, young enough to use the internet without their parent realizing, which also seems to be getting younger and younger these days.
Sample:
Harry Potter was once again standing with a group of other kids in a line you see Harry was one kid in a hundred that was in a orphanage and what's more he has also been there for six years and already hated the place you see Harry's old family had left him as a baby here they didn't even leave anything about themselves all Harry knew was that his parents were dead and that his name was Harry Potter and his birthday that's it nothing else not how his parents died or why his Uncle and aunt had left him there the only thing he had was his baby blanket that had some animal pictures with what he had to guess was his family's nicknames underneath but even still Harry didn't know much about his family
But maybe he would get a new one some of the older kids had commented that he might get adopted faster because of the fact that he was pretty young even if he was 6 years old and also seeing as he was the youngest there but even still the family that came today didn't choose him instead a little girl was picked and slumping a bit Harry followed the rest of the kids to the playground outside and quickly Harry sat down where he usually did he was almost underneath a bridge and turning Harry watched the other kids climbing on the playground equipment while the older kids watched the younger ones and Harry had to admit whoever stated that orphanages were evil never saw this place it was pretty good, plenty of stuff for the orphans to do speaking of which Harry looked down at his art pad he had after chatting with the orphanages art teacher he had found that he liked drawing and after a bit at his last birthday the teacher had given Harry a art book and he was busy drawing something at the moment he was drawing two eyes and quickly Harry pulled out a dark blue colored pencil and started coloring in the eyes when he heard something and looking up Harry watched as something small and blue landed in his arms and looking down Harry found some kind of puppet it looked to be some kind of bird with a large plastic beak but what was surprising was the blue fur that colored the small puppet although it looked like it was missing pieces
"Oh hey good catch" someone said and looking up Harry saw a tall black haired man looking down at him from the bridge with his Basel blue eyes
"Hey kid mind sending me back the puppet I still haven't finished it" the man asked and nodding Harry pointed towards the doors
"Sure thing mister why don't you meet me by the front door" Harry said and nodding the man started walking away from the edge and seemed to be talking to some people and quickly Harry went and after talking to one of the orphanage workers he and another worker went towards the door only to find the man with three other people waiting at the door