4218: The Titan of The Potter family - Alexander William Potter
Title: The Titan of the Potter family
Perpetrator: bmanbeast57
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: I’m not sure about the cover art.
Summary: “when James and Lily Potter adopted a baby they found in the forbidden forest they took the baby in they had no clue that the baby was the child of two of the most powerful beings known or the fact said child can throw a bolder around like a rag doll or cast magic like you breath air or he has a massive temper and a sword that can make a man got to splat.”
Full Name: Alexander William Potter
Species: He’s the son of someone named Eonar the Life-Binder and Aman’Thul the Highfather. He’s also to be paired with someone named Alexstrasza.
Hair: It is described as “short hair, which was spiked up”.
Eyes: n/a
Markings: He has a “horizontal scar on his face” He is also “quite built, his body packed with muscle. He was almost Dumbledore’s height which was 5’11 putting Alexander at 5’10.”
Possessions: “He was wearing armor that was pitch black hued and it covered his whole body except for his head and left arm. Not to mention the massive blded on his back (AN: The Beserker Armor from the Berserk and sword manga).” Sadly, we also learn this. “My personal time turnesr made me older yes and stronger. I aged at an accelerated rate in there. I was in thee for 18 minutes but inside I was their for 18 years. I did it because I was going to kill Voldemort but you had to go and get in the way.” I believe he has 200 golems.
Connection to Canon: Alexander shows up and brags about being able to kill whenever he wants to. The only reason he doesn’t is because this would make him a criminal. (This doesn’t not make him a good character.) He kidnaps Harry and Sirius. We then find out he faked James and Lily’s deaths. (This is only the first chapter, but nothing the writer does makes any sense.) Harry and his family are now running around the world of Warcraft. The story is just a bunch of random stuff showing off the fact the OC can do anything.
Origin: I honestly don’t know what the writer was thinking. I’m not sure how to describe the piece. He’s either a character from another world or the writer wants us to think Warcraft and Harry Potter are the same world. He also appears to be the guardian of Harry.
Special Abilities: His name is similar to the character he’s to be paired with. (I worry a bit the writer is trying to indicate their character is a male version of the canon character. I wish to mention the foul moth on this Stu. He also is able to step in and out of the shadows. Were also supposed to believe a child under a year was able to get special time turners but also decide he wants to kill Voldemort. On the positive side the character didn’t bring Lily and James back from the dead. I’m not sure faking their death is better. Turns out he was only seven, yet that should have been explained in the first chapter. Alexstrasza has a forced “soul mate bond/marriage” going on with the OC.
Notes: Sometimes I’m left wondering if two fandoms would really work together with how some people cross them together. Perhaps this has more to do with certain elements, like bringing in a fandom’s equivalent of Gods into another fandom as focal characters.
It’s also bad when a reviewer decides to write their review in ALL CAPS BECAUSE YOU CAN’T HOLD BACK ON “ALL THE CAPITAL LETTERS AND RAMPANT USE OF VULGARITY REDUCE THE VALUE OF THIS IN MY EYES.” Another reviewer rightfully questioned the time turners on the first chapter. I don’t think the writer really truly explained things, but I suspect they’d picked eighteen minutes for aging a year per minute.
Oh, and it is pretty bad when a reviewer accuses the writer of a “OC/SI power trip harem journey”. Another brings up Harry being the Master of Death which is FANON NOT CANON.
Sample:
It was a dark and cold Halloween night in Britain, or more specifically Godrics Hollow. The streets appeared to be deserted so it was a peaceful night, or was it.
"Bombarda Maxima, Petrificus Totalus, Stupefy." A gravely old voice said in quick succession.
"GO TO HELL YOU MANIPULATIVE OLD BASTARD ! YOU'RE NOT GETTING HARRY! I'LL DIE BEFORE I LET YOU SEND HIM TO THEM." A much younger voice snarled.
"I don't want to hurt you Alexander but Harry needs to be left at the Dursleys for the greater good." The old voice responded in a sage-like tone.
"THEY'LL DESTROY HIM! FUCK YOU! MOTHER SAID NEVER GO OR BE NEAR THEM, WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU. IT'S NOT YOUR RIGHT TO HAVE HIM IN THE FIRST FUCKING PLACE!" The now named Alexander yelled back while dogging another attack.
"IT'S FOR THE GREATER GOOD, EVERYTHING I DO IS." The old aged voice said fiercely.
"FUCK THAT AND YOU DUMBLEDORE! WE TRUSTED YOU! MYSELF, MY MOTHER, AND MY FATHER TRUSTED YOU AND NOW YOU DECLARED ME A MURDERER! THE WHOLE OF MAGICAL BRITAIN IS AFTER ME NOW YOU PRICK." Alexander shouted back at Dumbledore who merely sadly shook his head in response.
"You killed 100 Death Eaters! They could have been redeemed and brought back to the light!" Dumbledore said angrily, firing off another spell.
"MURDERERS AND RAPISTS CAN'T BE REDEEMED." Alexander screamed.
Perpetrator: bmanbeast57
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: I’m not sure about the cover art.
Summary: “when James and Lily Potter adopted a baby they found in the forbidden forest they took the baby in they had no clue that the baby was the child of two of the most powerful beings known or the fact said child can throw a bolder around like a rag doll or cast magic like you breath air or he has a massive temper and a sword that can make a man got to splat.”
Full Name: Alexander William Potter
Species: He’s the son of someone named Eonar the Life-Binder and Aman’Thul the Highfather. He’s also to be paired with someone named Alexstrasza.
Hair: It is described as “short hair, which was spiked up”.
Eyes: n/a
Markings: He has a “horizontal scar on his face” He is also “quite built, his body packed with muscle. He was almost Dumbledore’s height which was 5’11 putting Alexander at 5’10.”
Possessions: “He was wearing armor that was pitch black hued and it covered his whole body except for his head and left arm. Not to mention the massive blded on his back (AN: The Beserker Armor from the Berserk and sword manga).” Sadly, we also learn this. “My personal time turnesr made me older yes and stronger. I aged at an accelerated rate in there. I was in thee for 18 minutes but inside I was their for 18 years. I did it because I was going to kill Voldemort but you had to go and get in the way.” I believe he has 200 golems.
Connection to Canon: Alexander shows up and brags about being able to kill whenever he wants to. The only reason he doesn’t is because this would make him a criminal. (This doesn’t not make him a good character.) He kidnaps Harry and Sirius. We then find out he faked James and Lily’s deaths. (This is only the first chapter, but nothing the writer does makes any sense.) Harry and his family are now running around the world of Warcraft. The story is just a bunch of random stuff showing off the fact the OC can do anything.
Origin: I honestly don’t know what the writer was thinking. I’m not sure how to describe the piece. He’s either a character from another world or the writer wants us to think Warcraft and Harry Potter are the same world. He also appears to be the guardian of Harry.
Special Abilities: His name is similar to the character he’s to be paired with. (I worry a bit the writer is trying to indicate their character is a male version of the canon character. I wish to mention the foul moth on this Stu. He also is able to step in and out of the shadows. Were also supposed to believe a child under a year was able to get special time turners but also decide he wants to kill Voldemort. On the positive side the character didn’t bring Lily and James back from the dead. I’m not sure faking their death is better. Turns out he was only seven, yet that should have been explained in the first chapter. Alexstrasza has a forced “soul mate bond/marriage” going on with the OC.
Notes: Sometimes I’m left wondering if two fandoms would really work together with how some people cross them together. Perhaps this has more to do with certain elements, like bringing in a fandom’s equivalent of Gods into another fandom as focal characters.
It’s also bad when a reviewer decides to write their review in ALL CAPS BECAUSE YOU CAN’T HOLD BACK ON “ALL THE CAPITAL LETTERS AND RAMPANT USE OF VULGARITY REDUCE THE VALUE OF THIS IN MY EYES.” Another reviewer rightfully questioned the time turners on the first chapter. I don’t think the writer really truly explained things, but I suspect they’d picked eighteen minutes for aging a year per minute.
Oh, and it is pretty bad when a reviewer accuses the writer of a “OC/SI power trip harem journey”. Another brings up Harry being the Master of Death which is FANON NOT CANON.
Sample:
It was a dark and cold Halloween night in Britain, or more specifically Godrics Hollow. The streets appeared to be deserted so it was a peaceful night, or was it.
"Bombarda Maxima, Petrificus Totalus, Stupefy." A gravely old voice said in quick succession.
"GO TO HELL YOU MANIPULATIVE OLD BASTARD ! YOU'RE NOT GETTING HARRY! I'LL DIE BEFORE I LET YOU SEND HIM TO THEM." A much younger voice snarled.
"I don't want to hurt you Alexander but Harry needs to be left at the Dursleys for the greater good." The old voice responded in a sage-like tone.
"THEY'LL DESTROY HIM! FUCK YOU! MOTHER SAID NEVER GO OR BE NEAR THEM, WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU. IT'S NOT YOUR RIGHT TO HAVE HIM IN THE FIRST FUCKING PLACE!" The now named Alexander yelled back while dogging another attack.
"IT'S FOR THE GREATER GOOD, EVERYTHING I DO IS." The old aged voice said fiercely.
"FUCK THAT AND YOU DUMBLEDORE! WE TRUSTED YOU! MYSELF, MY MOTHER, AND MY FATHER TRUSTED YOU AND NOW YOU DECLARED ME A MURDERER! THE WHOLE OF MAGICAL BRITAIN IS AFTER ME NOW YOU PRICK." Alexander shouted back at Dumbledore who merely sadly shook his head in response.
"You killed 100 Death Eaters! They could have been redeemed and brought back to the light!" Dumbledore said angrily, firing off another spell.
"MURDERERS AND RAPISTS CAN'T BE REDEEMED." Alexander screamed.