4178: A Malfoy in Gryffindor - Pheonix Malfoy
One of the Suethors wishes to let anyone who’s interested know that they’d finished their story.
Title: A Malfoy in Gryffindor (repost)
Perpetrator: Mezita
Sue-O-Meter: Bad, but could easily become an awful or toxic if the writer isn’t careful. TOXIC!!!! One of the minions left a review, something I'm fine with. The Suethor didn't like said review ( Read more... )
Title: A Malfoy in Gryffindor (repost)
Perpetrator: Mezita
Sue-O-Meter: Bad, but could easily become an awful or toxic if the writer isn’t careful. TOXIC!!!! One of the minions left a review, something I'm fine with. The Suethor didn't like said review ( Read more... )
Why would the Sue see Severus Snape as a mentor, let alone know he's a half-breed? He wasn't open about the latter, but there is nothing about Snape's behavior which would teach the Sue to love Muggles and the Muggle world, but I doubt he would have contact, particularly when he's of a different social status than the Malfoy family.
Also, Draco's issue isn't that he doesn't have a will of his own. If that were true, he wouldn't have the about face at the end of the series like he did. His issue is the fact his parents sheltered him from things, and if he was sheltered, she would be to. I mean, the Malfoy's censored the Bard. The Suethor's trying to make her character special compared to Draco, but taking many of the traits he has and saying she can do better, that just snubs an already existing canon character.
Sirius also isn't a good example, not when he had his change of heart from coming in contact with others on the train who changed his opinion.
As for the reason for her name. Bull. The Malfoy family wouldn't know the name of the group, but having twin children is not something which would change Narcissa's perception. Worse, we never know Narcissa's view point on the matter, but why would two children do what one did not?
Also, it doesn't matter that this is the writers perception of the Malfoy family, or that is how they understand them. It doesn't matter because they've made it all to clear they DON'T understand the series at all. If someone calls you out for that, you're supposed to reexamine your analysis of the series, not stick to your guns!
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