4164 Children of the Maruaders (Book One) - Harry and Company...
Title: Children of the Marauders (Book One)
Perpetrator: KMW10151998
Sue-O-Meter: Awful
Cover/Banner Art: None
Summary: “Harry Potter and Sean Lupin lives with their aunt, Petunia Dursley. James Black lives with his mother. Zack Pettigrew lives with his mother and step-father. Soon, all of the boys will go to Hogwarts and start their journey. And they will have their journey together until the end”
Full Name: Harry Potter, Sean Lupin, James “Jim” Remus Black, Zack Peter Pettigrew, Candarce “Candy” Peterson, Maddi Smith (nee Pettigrw, nee Joy), Gary Smith, and the one the writer forgot from the list is Hayley Lupin, but she’s dead, so I guess she doesn’t count?
Species: Next generation marauders and their parents. Chapter three has a list of nicknames the writer wants people to choose. For the group, “rolling thungers”, “white wolves”, “silver wolves”, “phantoms”, “thunderbirds”, “silver lions”. Harry’s potential nick names “Buck”, “Bambi”, “Snowy”, Sean’s are “Omega”, “Beta”, and “Adolphus”, Jim’s are “Thunder” and “Chase, but Zack’s Are “Whiskers”. How about we not make them just like their parents?
Hair: Sean has light brown eyes.
Eyes: Sean has bright green eyes. “Their mums were identical twins. That’s why Harry’s and Sean’s eyes look the same.”
Markings:
Possessions: Apparently Remus married Lily and Petunia’s sister Hayley. James’s mother is Candy, because we all know Sirius would get together with someone whose name feels one step from a stripper because he womanizes women so much. (Sorry, but I’m really tired of the fanon portrayal of Sirius”. Hayley is Lily’s identical twin. Dudley gets his gifts. Jim gets accused of acting out when he did nothing, but Candy’s supposed to have been a Ravenclaw. We find out that Gary’s been in his life since Zack was four, and he started calling the man dad at age five. Third chapter has Hagrid show up, and random stuff including a birthday for Zack.
Connection to Canon: First chapter is a prologue, sort of. We’re introduced to all four boys, but don’t get to know any of them. Both Harry and Sean get stuck in the cuboard
Origin: I suspect a father young writer on this one. Harry and Sean are also born the same day.
Special Abilities:
Notes: The writer has two other HP stories so far. There’s a Sandy Riddle, daughter of Voldemort who Sirius falls in love with, and Harry’s twin sister Bluebell Lillian Potter. Two of the stories say “book one” in their title.
Sample:
A house on Privet Drive, lives the Dursley family. Vernon Dursley is the man of the house and likes it to stay that way. He lives with his wife, Petunia Dursley, and their "Wonderful" son, Dudley Dursley. The love where they live. They don't want anything to mess up where they live. But there are two things that they hate about their home. Their nephews, Harry James Potter and Sean Sirius Lupin. The reason is because the boys are wizards (but the boys don't know this because their aunt and uncle didn't tell them this). Petunia had to take the boys because her sisters (Lily Potter {nee Evans} and Hayley Lupin {nee Evans}) are dead. Sean's father couldn't raise Sean because of a "rare disease" (that Petunia doesn't of). He doesn't visit his son because he didn't want to tell the truth on why he couldn't raise him. Soon, Harry and Sean will find out that truth (about them being wizards) when they turn eleven.
Perpetrator: KMW10151998
Sue-O-Meter: Awful
Cover/Banner Art: None
Summary: “Harry Potter and Sean Lupin lives with their aunt, Petunia Dursley. James Black lives with his mother. Zack Pettigrew lives with his mother and step-father. Soon, all of the boys will go to Hogwarts and start their journey. And they will have their journey together until the end”
Full Name: Harry Potter, Sean Lupin, James “Jim” Remus Black, Zack Peter Pettigrew, Candarce “Candy” Peterson, Maddi Smith (nee Pettigrw, nee Joy), Gary Smith, and the one the writer forgot from the list is Hayley Lupin, but she’s dead, so I guess she doesn’t count?
Species: Next generation marauders and their parents. Chapter three has a list of nicknames the writer wants people to choose. For the group, “rolling thungers”, “white wolves”, “silver wolves”, “phantoms”, “thunderbirds”, “silver lions”. Harry’s potential nick names “Buck”, “Bambi”, “Snowy”, Sean’s are “Omega”, “Beta”, and “Adolphus”, Jim’s are “Thunder” and “Chase, but Zack’s Are “Whiskers”. How about we not make them just like their parents?
Hair: Sean has light brown eyes.
Eyes: Sean has bright green eyes. “Their mums were identical twins. That’s why Harry’s and Sean’s eyes look the same.”
Markings:
Possessions: Apparently Remus married Lily and Petunia’s sister Hayley. James’s mother is Candy, because we all know Sirius would get together with someone whose name feels one step from a stripper because he womanizes women so much. (Sorry, but I’m really tired of the fanon portrayal of Sirius”. Hayley is Lily’s identical twin. Dudley gets his gifts. Jim gets accused of acting out when he did nothing, but Candy’s supposed to have been a Ravenclaw. We find out that Gary’s been in his life since Zack was four, and he started calling the man dad at age five. Third chapter has Hagrid show up, and random stuff including a birthday for Zack.
Connection to Canon: First chapter is a prologue, sort of. We’re introduced to all four boys, but don’t get to know any of them. Both Harry and Sean get stuck in the cuboard
Origin: I suspect a father young writer on this one. Harry and Sean are also born the same day.
Special Abilities:
Notes: The writer has two other HP stories so far. There’s a Sandy Riddle, daughter of Voldemort who Sirius falls in love with, and Harry’s twin sister Bluebell Lillian Potter. Two of the stories say “book one” in their title.
Sample:
A house on Privet Drive, lives the Dursley family. Vernon Dursley is the man of the house and likes it to stay that way. He lives with his wife, Petunia Dursley, and their "Wonderful" son, Dudley Dursley. The love where they live. They don't want anything to mess up where they live. But there are two things that they hate about their home. Their nephews, Harry James Potter and Sean Sirius Lupin. The reason is because the boys are wizards (but the boys don't know this because their aunt and uncle didn't tell them this). Petunia had to take the boys because her sisters (Lily Potter {nee Evans} and Hayley Lupin {nee Evans}) are dead. Sean's father couldn't raise Sean because of a "rare disease" (that Petunia doesn't of). He doesn't visit his son because he didn't want to tell the truth on why he couldn't raise him. Soon, Harry and Sean will find out that truth (about them being wizards) when they turn eleven.