4109: The Lost Black - See entry.
Title: The Lost Black
Perpetrator: The Griffindor Hatstall
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: A picture of Hermione and Draco is their avatar.
Summary: “A life destroyed, a family torn apart. A hidden heir will change everything. Not great at summaries, but this one is worth it!“
Full Name: Nevaeh Shacklebolt-Black and Hermione Granger/Cassie Shacklebolt-Black (or so I thought - see connection to canon)
Species: We’re supposed to believe that Hermione is the daughter of Sirius Black and someone related to Shacklebolt.
Hair: n/a
Eyes: n/a
Markings: n/a
Possessions: She gets a necklace from Sirius that “every pureblooded woman in the room will be incredibly jealous not only of your brains, and beauty but now you have the jewels.”
Connection to Canon: Nevaeh senses the wards in the other homes - Potter and Longbottom - going away. We later on find out that Reginald Granger is a single parent. Hermione is acting like your typical rebellious teen as is angry he won’t let her go see Krum for the summer. He says no, only for her to talk him into letting her go. Tonks and Sirius talk about the safe room, and how they no longer use a fidelous because of what happened. Suddenly, Narcissa shows up in the safe house with Draco who is protecting a girl. Reginald Granger is upset because of “Cassi”. Only, it gets even more confusing. Regulus is the father of Cassiopeia. I went back and checked, and can’t find any mention of these two being separate, but Regulus is suddenly alive and well.
Origin: I’m not sure how to explain this, but for some reason Voldemort wanted to attack Sirius’ kid as well despite the fact the prophesy clearly says boys. Peter is also OoC. Yes Suethors, he did betray the Potters, but he was not made the secret keeper of the Longbottoms, so why would he be the secret keeper of the Shacklebolt-Black family.
Special Abilities: Nevaeh has a name that wasn’t popular let alone well known until 2000, yet she’s supposed to be old enough to be Hermione’s mother. Hermione speaks in a manner which is nothing like canon Hermione. Hermione is also to be paired with Harry. It might be that Hermione is, as of the reveal in chapter two the product of a slash pairing between to guys.
Notes: On one side I worry that the writer forgot that Shaklebolt is of African descent. On the other side, the writer may be playing into the idea of Hermione being of mixed ethnicity. However, their avatar shows a very white Hermione, one with the palest skin ever, so I have my doubts. Then I found out some stuff during second chapter, and the story went from awful to toxic rating wise. If you can find something I missed in the first chapter regarding Hermione and Cassie not being the same person, let me know.
Sample:
Nevaeh Shacklebolt-Black holds her two-year-old daughter Cassie protectively in the farthest corner of the safe room. She rocks the child trying not only to calm her but also to calm herself. The wards at the Potters safehouse had breached minutes ago, the Longbottoms followed within seconds. She wasn't stupid enough to think this was a conscience, this was planned. The order had been betrayed, her husband was nowhere to be found and she knew the safety of her daughter was up to her. Within seconds the wards to the Black safehouse were breached, as if someone led them the death eaters made their way to the safe room door and blasted it open. A flash of green and the sound of apparition were the last things she experienced before she fell dead on the ground.
"They trusted you!" Sirius screamed at the blank face of his longtime friend Peter. "We all trusted you and you sold out our best friends, they are dead because of you! Frank and Alice faced a fate worse than death because of you!" Sirius's magic is sparking through his hair and the Black madness is clear on his face. The blank mask Peter wore dropped as he smirked darkly at him.
"Your forgetting something dear padfoot. You think I would only lead them to 2 out of 3? Did you know your insane family is so paranoid, that your saferoom cannot be penetrated even with fiendfire? Your darling little wife screamed like the weak woman she was as she took her Avada. She thought she was so brave that somehow, we would feel pity on her or that brat of yours! The best part is someone apparated into the saferoom and the only person who could do that was a Black! So, think about this one when you are on your high horse Black! I took your wife, your daughter, your best friends, and your brother. You are nothing Black! I win, game over."
Later witnesses would say that they never actually saw a spell or what caused the explosion, all they really knew about the explosion that rocked Godrics Hollow is that the last thing they heard was a tortured scream of a broken heart.
Present Day
"Now father, you know I don't ask to do much over the summer except go to the Weasleys. I have been invited to a ball at Krum Manor in Bulgaria. I would only be gone for the weekend, and there will be chaperones at all times!" Hermione asks her father giving him the eyes that always got her what she wanted.
Saying Reginald Granger was a strict father would be an understatement. Raising a daughter as a single father tended to make a man a bit stricter than normal. Having lost his wife in a car accident when his darling Hermione was a baby also kept him on edge.
"Hermione Jean, you can't go spending weekends at random boy's homes anymore. I only allow the Weasleys because you room with Ginerva."
Perpetrator: The Griffindor Hatstall
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: A picture of Hermione and Draco is their avatar.
Summary: “A life destroyed, a family torn apart. A hidden heir will change everything. Not great at summaries, but this one is worth it!“
Full Name: Nevaeh Shacklebolt-Black and Hermione Granger/Cassie Shacklebolt-Black (or so I thought - see connection to canon)
Species: We’re supposed to believe that Hermione is the daughter of Sirius Black and someone related to Shacklebolt.
Hair: n/a
Eyes: n/a
Markings: n/a
Possessions: She gets a necklace from Sirius that “every pureblooded woman in the room will be incredibly jealous not only of your brains, and beauty but now you have the jewels.”
Connection to Canon: Nevaeh senses the wards in the other homes - Potter and Longbottom - going away. We later on find out that Reginald Granger is a single parent. Hermione is acting like your typical rebellious teen as is angry he won’t let her go see Krum for the summer. He says no, only for her to talk him into letting her go. Tonks and Sirius talk about the safe room, and how they no longer use a fidelous because of what happened. Suddenly, Narcissa shows up in the safe house with Draco who is protecting a girl. Reginald Granger is upset because of “Cassi”. Only, it gets even more confusing. Regulus is the father of Cassiopeia. I went back and checked, and can’t find any mention of these two being separate, but Regulus is suddenly alive and well.
Origin: I’m not sure how to explain this, but for some reason Voldemort wanted to attack Sirius’ kid as well despite the fact the prophesy clearly says boys. Peter is also OoC. Yes Suethors, he did betray the Potters, but he was not made the secret keeper of the Longbottoms, so why would he be the secret keeper of the Shacklebolt-Black family.
Special Abilities: Nevaeh has a name that wasn’t popular let alone well known until 2000, yet she’s supposed to be old enough to be Hermione’s mother. Hermione speaks in a manner which is nothing like canon Hermione. Hermione is also to be paired with Harry. It might be that Hermione is, as of the reveal in chapter two the product of a slash pairing between to guys.
Notes: On one side I worry that the writer forgot that Shaklebolt is of African descent. On the other side, the writer may be playing into the idea of Hermione being of mixed ethnicity. However, their avatar shows a very white Hermione, one with the palest skin ever, so I have my doubts. Then I found out some stuff during second chapter, and the story went from awful to toxic rating wise. If you can find something I missed in the first chapter regarding Hermione and Cassie not being the same person, let me know.
Sample:
Nevaeh Shacklebolt-Black holds her two-year-old daughter Cassie protectively in the farthest corner of the safe room. She rocks the child trying not only to calm her but also to calm herself. The wards at the Potters safehouse had breached minutes ago, the Longbottoms followed within seconds. She wasn't stupid enough to think this was a conscience, this was planned. The order had been betrayed, her husband was nowhere to be found and she knew the safety of her daughter was up to her. Within seconds the wards to the Black safehouse were breached, as if someone led them the death eaters made their way to the safe room door and blasted it open. A flash of green and the sound of apparition were the last things she experienced before she fell dead on the ground.
"They trusted you!" Sirius screamed at the blank face of his longtime friend Peter. "We all trusted you and you sold out our best friends, they are dead because of you! Frank and Alice faced a fate worse than death because of you!" Sirius's magic is sparking through his hair and the Black madness is clear on his face. The blank mask Peter wore dropped as he smirked darkly at him.
"Your forgetting something dear padfoot. You think I would only lead them to 2 out of 3? Did you know your insane family is so paranoid, that your saferoom cannot be penetrated even with fiendfire? Your darling little wife screamed like the weak woman she was as she took her Avada. She thought she was so brave that somehow, we would feel pity on her or that brat of yours! The best part is someone apparated into the saferoom and the only person who could do that was a Black! So, think about this one when you are on your high horse Black! I took your wife, your daughter, your best friends, and your brother. You are nothing Black! I win, game over."
Later witnesses would say that they never actually saw a spell or what caused the explosion, all they really knew about the explosion that rocked Godrics Hollow is that the last thing they heard was a tortured scream of a broken heart.
Present Day
"Now father, you know I don't ask to do much over the summer except go to the Weasleys. I have been invited to a ball at Krum Manor in Bulgaria. I would only be gone for the weekend, and there will be chaperones at all times!" Hermione asks her father giving him the eyes that always got her what she wanted.
Saying Reginald Granger was a strict father would be an understatement. Raising a daughter as a single father tended to make a man a bit stricter than normal. Having lost his wife in a car accident when his darling Hermione was a baby also kept him on edge.
"Hermione Jean, you can't go spending weekends at random boy's homes anymore. I only allow the Weasleys because you room with Ginerva."