4069: Evangeline Potter & The Sorcerer's Stone - Evangeline Potter
- The link of the day is How to Tell if your Character is a Mary Sue , and here are some of the previous links of the day which you may find useful. Both can actually be Mary Sues though, if one thinks about it.
- Flashback Sue
- Don't forget about the Sorting Hat.
TITLE: Evangeline Potter & The Sorcerer's Stone
PERPETRATOR: She Lives In The Darkness
SUE-O-METER: Bad Edit (8/30/2019) - I've come back to this one because I've found another story by this writer with the same Sue and I'm bumping the rating up to Awful.
COVER/BANNER ART: A rmessy cover. Did the writer use Lucy from the Narnia movies for Evangeline though?
SUMMARY:” Harry Potter AU Evangeline Potter, a girl who discovers days before her eleventh birthday that she is the orphaned daughter of two wizards. She is somewhat saved from her life as an unwanted child to become a student at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft & Wizardry. While there, she meets many people who become her closest allies.”
FULL NAME: Evangeline Potter
SPECIES: She’s Harry’s replacement, but not. Instead of using Harry’s name for this female Harry, the writer used the OC tag. Yet how will she differ from Harry other then gender?
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: A scar of course.
POSSESSIONS: A crib.
CONNECTION TO CANON:
ORIGIN: The writer wanted to do a female version of Harry.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Since there is only the first chapter, Evengeline is just a Copy Cat/Parasite Sue so far. There is no telling where this one will go. Edit - (8/30/2019) I've come back and all the writer did was copy and paste, plus make a few edits sadly.
NOTES: I suspect the writer’s young, even possibly not old enough to have an account. Here is the summary for the writers Legend of Korra fic. “When Korra was fifteen she met a boy and became pregnant after she was able to escape her parents and White Lotus. A while after she found out she was pregnant. Now two years later after mastering three of the elements, she decides she's ready to learn air and goes to republic city. Can she balance being a mom and the duties that come with being the avatar?”
SAMPLE:
October 31st was a big day for many people in the wizarding world, for most it was a day to celebrate. Others it was a day to mourn, and for the muggles, it was just a normal day for them. The Dursleys were one of the muggles who was affected by this day, though, for them it was all in terrible ways. The terrible wonderful thing that occured that day happened in Godrics Hallows late in the evening. A baby girl sat in a crib in a tattered house, she had stopped crying when the man had come, and hadnt cried since he left. She couldn't remember anything nor had she seen anything, but she saw her mother lying on the ground, unmoving. Something clicked in the baby, she didnt know what had happened, but she knew it was bad, and she was scared. "Dadda." She cried, hoping he would come to get her. She fell asleep after growing hoarse and crawling out of the crib to lie with her mother.
- Flashback Sue
- Don't forget about the Sorting Hat.
TITLE: Evangeline Potter & The Sorcerer's Stone
PERPETRATOR: She Lives In The Darkness
SUE-O-METER: Bad Edit (8/30/2019) - I've come back to this one because I've found another story by this writer with the same Sue and I'm bumping the rating up to Awful.
COVER/BANNER ART: A rmessy cover. Did the writer use Lucy from the Narnia movies for Evangeline though?
SUMMARY:” Harry Potter AU Evangeline Potter, a girl who discovers days before her eleventh birthday that she is the orphaned daughter of two wizards. She is somewhat saved from her life as an unwanted child to become a student at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft & Wizardry. While there, she meets many people who become her closest allies.”
FULL NAME: Evangeline Potter
SPECIES: She’s Harry’s replacement, but not. Instead of using Harry’s name for this female Harry, the writer used the OC tag. Yet how will she differ from Harry other then gender?
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: A scar of course.
POSSESSIONS: A crib.
CONNECTION TO CANON:
ORIGIN: The writer wanted to do a female version of Harry.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Since there is only the first chapter, Evengeline is just a Copy Cat/Parasite Sue so far. There is no telling where this one will go. Edit - (8/30/2019) I've come back and all the writer did was copy and paste, plus make a few edits sadly.
NOTES: I suspect the writer’s young, even possibly not old enough to have an account. Here is the summary for the writers Legend of Korra fic. “When Korra was fifteen she met a boy and became pregnant after she was able to escape her parents and White Lotus. A while after she found out she was pregnant. Now two years later after mastering three of the elements, she decides she's ready to learn air and goes to republic city. Can she balance being a mom and the duties that come with being the avatar?”
SAMPLE:
October 31st was a big day for many people in the wizarding world, for most it was a day to celebrate. Others it was a day to mourn, and for the muggles, it was just a normal day for them. The Dursleys were one of the muggles who was affected by this day, though, for them it was all in terrible ways. The terrible wonderful thing that occured that day happened in Godrics Hallows late in the evening. A baby girl sat in a crib in a tattered house, she had stopped crying when the man had come, and hadnt cried since he left. She couldn't remember anything nor had she seen anything, but she saw her mother lying on the ground, unmoving. Something clicked in the baby, she didnt know what had happened, but she knew it was bad, and she was scared. "Dadda." She cried, hoping he would come to get her. She fell asleep after growing hoarse and crawling out of the crib to lie with her mother.