4068: Starlight Butterfly and Dark Dagger - Hermione and Voldemort
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TITLE: Starlight Butterfly and Dark Dagger
PERPETRATOR: Deese -Rouge-Cheveux
SUE-O-METER: Troll
COVER/BANNER ART:
SUMMARY:” Complete. -Hermione finds new lineage, and things are reversed. Romance with Draco ensues. Really shitty piece of work...don't read if you have any proper sense of Harry Potter and its characters. Interesting if you want a fun, long air-brained story.” What does it mean to have an air-brained story?
FULL NAME: Hermione “Mia” Granger, Tom Riddle
SPECIES: Not Hermione, that’s for sure. She’s one third elf, one third fairy ,and one third witch/wizard.
HAIR:”sleek brown hair”
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: “Around her belly button was a small circle of white daisies and under her collarbone on each side were golden stars. Along her arms were two dragons, a periwinkle one and a dark green one. Her back was adorned with streaks of flames. Her ankles had two bands of water encompassing them. On the insides of her wrists were two gold, circular suns with black witchcraft stars in the middle. The body drawings where each intricate and were numerous, but didn’t overrule Hermione herself. There was still quite an amount of skin to her body. (AN: Other words: She wasn’t covered in tattoos from head to toe.)” Let’s also not forget, “she had elegant white-blue wings that just made it past her shoulders when outstretched.”
POSSESSIONS: “She was wearing short pajama bottoms and a fairly ripped top.” Voldemort also has a vampire-servant.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Hermione has a dream where a stalker shows up in her room, and brushes a hand over her wings. (This actually came out before Twilight.) We get the line about Manatees stampeding the school. She finds out she is the most amazing fairy/elf/witch whose super pretty, and has no problems with the fact Tom is her father. In the second chapter is to learn how her wings work. She also is happy to see Tom, with a “I missed you, Daddy.” (Sure.) He instantly asks her about dating. Chapter three is a food fight. Chapter four has Hogwarts open again.
ORIGIN:I can’t help but suspect a troll when we have the line, “Then, a herd of Manatees, a very dark creature, stampeded through the ground leaving extensive damage. The result: No school for a month." The writer also says they didn’t know how long the story would be, noting that the writers with stories over 100k couldn’t possibly know. If it’s not a troll, then it is a really Toxic fic. In fact, if it weren’t for that line, it would have gotten said rating. Tom suddenly hates “elf labor”, as in House Elves, not the ones he killed.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: This is one of the earliest creature inheritance at age sixteen fics, either parodying other stories, or the start of that trope. Hermione was only in her mother for four months because her real father is Voldemort, and the Elves hid her away when Tom Riddle tried to get her mother to have an abortion. Then he comes and kills all the Elves, and decides he loves his baby daughter. She wants to become an Animagus, and “you are part fairy already, so that will be your creature. If you turned into anything else you’d have wings and point ears of the Elf tradition. It’s be a really odd combination with dire consequences.”
NOTES: The reviews for this fic are really mixed. Here are some of the gems though.
Chapter 1: “This story is a childhood favorite of mine. When I was 12 years old I remember me and my best friend sitting on the couch in front of the computer reading this fanfiction.” (This would actually make the reader sixteen or younger.)
Chapter 2: “And tell that person ‘1/3ds’ could be possible if one parent was half something, half something else.” No, she’d be a quarter of something, not a third.
Anyways, the entry may have missed something, as I read through only the first few chapters on this one.
SAMPLE:
Hermione was sitting on a bed with satin sheets stroking her sleek brown hair. Wait, her hair isn't sleek. She heard a lock click open and stood.
In came a dark hooded figure. "I see you have awaited me?" A voice familiar, yet so different and echoing.
"Yes, love." Hermione's voice replied. She walked slowly and gracefully over to the man.
Hermione's hands reached around the hooded figure's neck. His hands snaked down around her waist. She lifted her head to kiss him, his arms maneuvered over her.... her wings???!!!!!
She gasped and stood back, looking away. "I-I have w-wings?" Hermione squeaked.
"I thought we described this. How I can love you and how you got the wings, about your body arrrr..." That was when she awoke.
Hermione got out of bed. She walked over to the mirror. A shriek of terror split through her house.
Within two seconds her parents were in her room. "Are you hurt?" Her mother screamed.
"Is something wrong, baby?" Mr. Granger apprehensively looked around the room.
"I'm not hurt." Hermione whispered.
- Flashback Sue
- Don't forget about the Sorting Hat.
TITLE: Starlight Butterfly and Dark Dagger
PERPETRATOR: Deese -Rouge-Cheveux
SUE-O-METER: Troll
COVER/BANNER ART:
SUMMARY:” Complete. -Hermione finds new lineage, and things are reversed. Romance with Draco ensues. Really shitty piece of work...don't read if you have any proper sense of Harry Potter and its characters. Interesting if you want a fun, long air-brained story.” What does it mean to have an air-brained story?
FULL NAME: Hermione “Mia” Granger, Tom Riddle
SPECIES: Not Hermione, that’s for sure. She’s one third elf, one third fairy ,and one third witch/wizard.
HAIR:”sleek brown hair”
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: “Around her belly button was a small circle of white daisies and under her collarbone on each side were golden stars. Along her arms were two dragons, a periwinkle one and a dark green one. Her back was adorned with streaks of flames. Her ankles had two bands of water encompassing them. On the insides of her wrists were two gold, circular suns with black witchcraft stars in the middle. The body drawings where each intricate and were numerous, but didn’t overrule Hermione herself. There was still quite an amount of skin to her body. (AN: Other words: She wasn’t covered in tattoos from head to toe.)” Let’s also not forget, “she had elegant white-blue wings that just made it past her shoulders when outstretched.”
POSSESSIONS: “She was wearing short pajama bottoms and a fairly ripped top.” Voldemort also has a vampire-servant.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Hermione has a dream where a stalker shows up in her room, and brushes a hand over her wings. (This actually came out before Twilight.) We get the line about Manatees stampeding the school. She finds out she is the most amazing fairy/elf/witch whose super pretty, and has no problems with the fact Tom is her father. In the second chapter is to learn how her wings work. She also is happy to see Tom, with a “I missed you, Daddy.” (Sure.) He instantly asks her about dating. Chapter three is a food fight. Chapter four has Hogwarts open again.
ORIGIN:I can’t help but suspect a troll when we have the line, “Then, a herd of Manatees, a very dark creature, stampeded through the ground leaving extensive damage. The result: No school for a month." The writer also says they didn’t know how long the story would be, noting that the writers with stories over 100k couldn’t possibly know. If it’s not a troll, then it is a really Toxic fic. In fact, if it weren’t for that line, it would have gotten said rating. Tom suddenly hates “elf labor”, as in House Elves, not the ones he killed.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: This is one of the earliest creature inheritance at age sixteen fics, either parodying other stories, or the start of that trope. Hermione was only in her mother for four months because her real father is Voldemort, and the Elves hid her away when Tom Riddle tried to get her mother to have an abortion. Then he comes and kills all the Elves, and decides he loves his baby daughter. She wants to become an Animagus, and “you are part fairy already, so that will be your creature. If you turned into anything else you’d have wings and point ears of the Elf tradition. It’s be a really odd combination with dire consequences.”
NOTES: The reviews for this fic are really mixed. Here are some of the gems though.
Chapter 1: “This story is a childhood favorite of mine. When I was 12 years old I remember me and my best friend sitting on the couch in front of the computer reading this fanfiction.” (This would actually make the reader sixteen or younger.)
Chapter 2: “And tell that person ‘1/3ds’ could be possible if one parent was half something, half something else.” No, she’d be a quarter of something, not a third.
Anyways, the entry may have missed something, as I read through only the first few chapters on this one.
SAMPLE:
Hermione was sitting on a bed with satin sheets stroking her sleek brown hair. Wait, her hair isn't sleek. She heard a lock click open and stood.
In came a dark hooded figure. "I see you have awaited me?" A voice familiar, yet so different and echoing.
"Yes, love." Hermione's voice replied. She walked slowly and gracefully over to the man.
Hermione's hands reached around the hooded figure's neck. His hands snaked down around her waist. She lifted her head to kiss him, his arms maneuvered over her.... her wings???!!!!!
She gasped and stood back, looking away. "I-I have w-wings?" Hermione squeaked.
"I thought we described this. How I can love you and how you got the wings, about your body arrrr..." That was when she awoke.
Hermione got out of bed. She walked over to the mirror. A shriek of terror split through her house.
Within two seconds her parents were in her room. "Are you hurt?" Her mother screamed.
"Is something wrong, baby?" Mr. Granger apprehensively looked around the room.
"I'm not hurt." Hermione whispered.