3589: Harry Potter and the Telipifucuius Stone - Harriet
- The link of the day is Pokemon Fanfiction OC Cliches.
- Flashback Sue
For day seven we have a really old entry.
TITLE: Harry Potter and the Telipificious Stone
PERPETRATOR:
SUE-O-METER: Bad
COVER/BANNER ART: None, the fic is to old.
SUMMARY:”Harriet joins Hogwarts with her magical pet snake. Join the new adventures!”
FULL NAME: Harriet
SPECIES: She's a former Beauxbataons student
HAIR:
EYES:
MARKINGS:
POSSESSIONS: She has a snake named Sly.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Nothing specific. She's likely Harry's long lost twin. She's excited about the Christmas Ball, which by the way doesn't occur at Hogwarts, as the Yule Ball is related to the Triwizard Championship. She gets injured in chapter two and vomits. We meet a new teacher named Kcalb Suiris in chapter three. He teaches DADA.
ORIGIN: She's some random OC.
SPECIAL ABILITIES:
NOTES: I'm really tired of the number of so called AUs we've come across of late, all of them really being original fiction. I'll read through most Mary Sues, but when it's original fiction I tend not to be able to get far. We read fanfiction for specific reasons.
SAMPLE:
Harriet ran through the corridor wondering what she should wear and who she should go with to the christmas ball. Her billowing burgundy robes followed her running movements. Her long dark brown hair flew out behind her and her dark brown eyes followed her twisted route to the North Tower. Harriet had moved from Beauxbatons to Hogwarts in year four and being a 5th year she had decided to move from ancient runes to Professor Trelawny's classes. It was her first lesson ever and she already was half an hour late, thanks to peeves.
She had seen peeves half way up to the North Tower where he was snatching her books and throwing them back down the stairs. Harriet had been down and up those stairs twenty times due to peeves 'fun'. This had only stopped when Harriet set Sly her pet snake onto Peeves. She then had a thoroughly entertaining first listen to Peeves brand new single…
"Help help the snake is coming!" Harriet being a parsletongue understood what Sly was saying. He was cursing Peeves and calling him every name under the sun. It was rather to Harriet's amusement. She started running again clutching her books so that Peeves didn't grab hold of them again. She turned and called to Sly who stopped tormenting Peeves and slithered lazily back to the Gryffindor common room. Harriet ran to where the ladder was poised, grabbed it and hauled herself up panting a little. When she got up the stairs and into the classroom she started apologising profoundly for being late on her very first lesson.
"No problems dear." Said Professor Trelawny. "But next time go with everyone else as Peeves will be waiting there again." The class sniggered. "We've been watching you through my magical viewer." Harriet reddened slightly and slid into a seat next to Harry where Ron should have been.
"Where are Ron and Hermione?" she whispered.
"Hermione doesn't do this lesson and Ron got punched by Malfoy and is in the hospital wing."
"Oh!" said Harriet as she settled down in the plush chair. They were studying tealeaves again and at this announcement Harry groaned making everyone look at him. Harry buried his head in the hard marble table again until everyone turned back round.
"What's so bad about tealeaves?" Harriet said as she drank her tea,
- Flashback Sue
For day seven we have a really old entry.
TITLE: Harry Potter and the Telipificious Stone
PERPETRATOR:
SUE-O-METER: Bad
COVER/BANNER ART: None, the fic is to old.
SUMMARY:”Harriet joins Hogwarts with her magical pet snake. Join the new adventures!”
FULL NAME: Harriet
SPECIES: She's a former Beauxbataons student
HAIR:
EYES:
MARKINGS:
POSSESSIONS: She has a snake named Sly.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Nothing specific. She's likely Harry's long lost twin. She's excited about the Christmas Ball, which by the way doesn't occur at Hogwarts, as the Yule Ball is related to the Triwizard Championship. She gets injured in chapter two and vomits. We meet a new teacher named Kcalb Suiris in chapter three. He teaches DADA.
ORIGIN: She's some random OC.
SPECIAL ABILITIES:
NOTES: I'm really tired of the number of so called AUs we've come across of late, all of them really being original fiction. I'll read through most Mary Sues, but when it's original fiction I tend not to be able to get far. We read fanfiction for specific reasons.
SAMPLE:
Harriet ran through the corridor wondering what she should wear and who she should go with to the christmas ball. Her billowing burgundy robes followed her running movements. Her long dark brown hair flew out behind her and her dark brown eyes followed her twisted route to the North Tower. Harriet had moved from Beauxbatons to Hogwarts in year four and being a 5th year she had decided to move from ancient runes to Professor Trelawny's classes. It was her first lesson ever and she already was half an hour late, thanks to peeves.
She had seen peeves half way up to the North Tower where he was snatching her books and throwing them back down the stairs. Harriet had been down and up those stairs twenty times due to peeves 'fun'. This had only stopped when Harriet set Sly her pet snake onto Peeves. She then had a thoroughly entertaining first listen to Peeves brand new single…
"Help help the snake is coming!" Harriet being a parsletongue understood what Sly was saying. He was cursing Peeves and calling him every name under the sun. It was rather to Harriet's amusement. She started running again clutching her books so that Peeves didn't grab hold of them again. She turned and called to Sly who stopped tormenting Peeves and slithered lazily back to the Gryffindor common room. Harriet ran to where the ladder was poised, grabbed it and hauled herself up panting a little. When she got up the stairs and into the classroom she started apologising profoundly for being late on her very first lesson.
"No problems dear." Said Professor Trelawny. "But next time go with everyone else as Peeves will be waiting there again." The class sniggered. "We've been watching you through my magical viewer." Harriet reddened slightly and slid into a seat next to Harry where Ron should have been.
"Where are Ron and Hermione?" she whispered.
"Hermione doesn't do this lesson and Ron got punched by Malfoy and is in the hospital wing."
"Oh!" said Harriet as she settled down in the plush chair. They were studying tealeaves again and at this announcement Harry groaned making everyone look at him. Harry buried his head in the hard marble table again until everyone turned back round.
"What's so bad about tealeaves?" Harriet said as she drank her tea,