3498: I Am Eternity
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- The link of the day is something wierd. Not sure what to think of it.
- Flashback Sue
TITLE: I Am Eternity
PERPETRATOR: lola9525
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: n/a, didn't stop to look
SUMMARY:”This is my hellsing ultimate harry potter crossover. i am in love with hellsing! if my characters are ooc, tell me politely please. no flames please! this is set after the war, but dumbledore never died. will have lots of dumbledore bashing, ron, hermione and ginny bashing, and honestly, lots of vampire slaughter. rated m for violence, language and, maybe a little alurry loving!”
FULL NAME: Sakura Potter-Higurashi, Harry Potter
SPECIES: She's Harry's twin sister.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first story starts off with Harry tied up, and Dumbledore saying they need to be done with him. He is then rescued by Alucard. Harry knows who he is as well. In the second chapter Alucard admits the rescue was random, and Harry then meets Seras at this point. Nothing much other then the introduction of Harry Potter's fake Mary Sue sister. Then nothing happens, and the seven chapter is an RIP for those who died in Paris.
ORIGIN: “The girl is Sakura Potter-Higurashi, my oc. she's harry's twin sister who dumbles left in japan to die, but she was found and grew up in a slightly regular household. watch inuyasha, and you'll know what i mean.” And then “By the way, my name's Sakura. My last name is now two, my birth family's and my adoptive family's, making my full name Sakura Nohana Potter-higurashi. My first and middle name are a play on the words "sakura no hana," or cherry blossoms in english. I had actually come here because a man I once met said something about the Hellsing organization being good trackers. I never imagined i'd have such an easy time finding you, as I never seem to have any luck with these kinds of things. Although…" she paused, looking down at Lovino. "It seems my awful timing hasn't changed a bit, and my habit of getting captured is still going on strong."
SPECIAL ABILITIES: In chapter five the writer says about Schrodinger, “I know he is being OOC, but that is how the situation i have him in would call for him to portray.” Yeah, I doubt it.
NOTES: Something is wrong when the writer refers to the canon characters as their characters. Actually, there really isn't anything good about this story.
SAMPLE:
Harry potter woke up bound and gagged, not knowing where he was. As he woke up, he heard arguing, and looked up to see an open door, the light on the other side causing the shadows of two people on the floor. Harry listened closely to their argument, and was shocked that one of them was Dumbledore!
"The boy is to be destroyed! he is no longer useful to us now that the Dark Lord is dead." Dumbledore was saying, causing pain to erupt in Harry's chest.
I was nothing to him? He was only using me? Why? Harry could only listen in horror as Dumbledore planned his death.
"It shall not take long, the boy is pathetic. He was lucky that his friends knew what to do. He is of no use to me." Harry started sobbing silently for a few minutes, but then felt nothing but rage.
"How interesting..." A husky voice spoke next to his ear. Harry then turned his head to see a man wearing a long crimson coat, a red hat and orange sunglasses. In the man's hand was a big silver gun, and on the side of it were the words,"Hellsing 454 Casull." Harry started when the man bent down and picked him up!
"Let's see what these imbeciles think when they find you gone, little one." Harry tried to admonish him through the gag, but only succeeded in making the man more amused. The man then stepped backwards into the shadows, making Harry startle again. The man chuckled, then introduced himself.
- The link of the day is something wierd. Not sure what to think of it.
- Flashback Sue
TITLE: I Am Eternity
PERPETRATOR: lola9525
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: n/a, didn't stop to look
SUMMARY:”This is my hellsing ultimate harry potter crossover. i am in love with hellsing! if my characters are ooc, tell me politely please. no flames please! this is set after the war, but dumbledore never died. will have lots of dumbledore bashing, ron, hermione and ginny bashing, and honestly, lots of vampire slaughter. rated m for violence, language and, maybe a little alurry loving!”
FULL NAME: Sakura Potter-Higurashi, Harry Potter
SPECIES: She's Harry's twin sister.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first story starts off with Harry tied up, and Dumbledore saying they need to be done with him. He is then rescued by Alucard. Harry knows who he is as well. In the second chapter Alucard admits the rescue was random, and Harry then meets Seras at this point. Nothing much other then the introduction of Harry Potter's fake Mary Sue sister. Then nothing happens, and the seven chapter is an RIP for those who died in Paris.
ORIGIN: “The girl is Sakura Potter-Higurashi, my oc. she's harry's twin sister who dumbles left in japan to die, but she was found and grew up in a slightly regular household. watch inuyasha, and you'll know what i mean.” And then “By the way, my name's Sakura. My last name is now two, my birth family's and my adoptive family's, making my full name Sakura Nohana Potter-higurashi. My first and middle name are a play on the words "sakura no hana," or cherry blossoms in english. I had actually come here because a man I once met said something about the Hellsing organization being good trackers. I never imagined i'd have such an easy time finding you, as I never seem to have any luck with these kinds of things. Although…" she paused, looking down at Lovino. "It seems my awful timing hasn't changed a bit, and my habit of getting captured is still going on strong."
SPECIAL ABILITIES: In chapter five the writer says about Schrodinger, “I know he is being OOC, but that is how the situation i have him in would call for him to portray.” Yeah, I doubt it.
NOTES: Something is wrong when the writer refers to the canon characters as their characters. Actually, there really isn't anything good about this story.
SAMPLE:
Harry potter woke up bound and gagged, not knowing where he was. As he woke up, he heard arguing, and looked up to see an open door, the light on the other side causing the shadows of two people on the floor. Harry listened closely to their argument, and was shocked that one of them was Dumbledore!
"The boy is to be destroyed! he is no longer useful to us now that the Dark Lord is dead." Dumbledore was saying, causing pain to erupt in Harry's chest.
I was nothing to him? He was only using me? Why? Harry could only listen in horror as Dumbledore planned his death.
"It shall not take long, the boy is pathetic. He was lucky that his friends knew what to do. He is of no use to me." Harry started sobbing silently for a few minutes, but then felt nothing but rage.
"How interesting..." A husky voice spoke next to his ear. Harry then turned his head to see a man wearing a long crimson coat, a red hat and orange sunglasses. In the man's hand was a big silver gun, and on the side of it were the words,"Hellsing 454 Casull." Harry started when the man bent down and picked him up!
"Let's see what these imbeciles think when they find you gone, little one." Harry tried to admonish him through the gag, but only succeeded in making the man more amused. The man then stepped backwards into the shadows, making Harry startle again. The man chuckled, then introduced himself.