Mary-You #7

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And so, I breathe a sigh of relief as we arrive at this, our final YouJack. mylla directed me towards this one. Sometimes, I think she's trying to kill me.

TITLE: A Stolen Girl, 3 Stolen Hearts
CULPRIT: SlythPrincess
SUMMARY: "You are a young woman who is left all alone after your mother dies. You marry Commodore Norrington, but when you are stolen by

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I loathe "You/CanonCharacter" PotC fanfiction with a passion of a thousand suns. But this one? This one greatly disturbs me due to these so-called "rapings". It also disturbs me that a person would go into detail about someone raping me and then describing my rapist's actions and words as well as my own. No. Just no.

His first response was an arched eyebrow. "Surely an experienced captain such as yourself knows that when the crew is willing to co-operate it makes the day a lot easier then if they argued with everything you said to them. I can ensure that I will give you no trouble over any task if you leave Port Royal," you smirk to yourself, thinking you have the upper hand.

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He continues to watch you in a disturbing manner. "Is there anything you want me to do?" you ask hearing the crew shouting, thinking that maybe they needed another set of hands.

Maybe the author would say such things in a situation like this, but I don't appreciate her portraying me as a clueless and naive woman.

The captain, as he preferred to be called, would keep you locked in his cabin all day as his personal slave, your only deed was to satisfy his lusty needs, although you were certain there were better women suited to the job.

Exactly what does this author mean by better women? This sentence doesn't settle well with me.

It amazes me how I can go from feeling shamed and lowly after being raped to feeling fine and dandy just a little while later. I reprimand the author for writing such a rotten tale. It made me baby Barbossa cry.