"Capitain" Morgane Black [Mary-You #1]

[potcsues]

So here we are at the beginning of YouJack week. I'll admit, I'm not that big a fan of second person in the first place. Generally, I find it awkward and just entirely unnecessary. It always strikes me as a gimmick perspective. That said, it takes a skilled writer to convince me otherwise. There aren't that many skilled writers at The Pit of Voles

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[wolfychan]

Lord. I didn't know I was such an angsty freakin' drama queen. I mean, I'm traumatised by the mere memory of consensual sex, I'm panicked when a man I've known for ten minutes innocently talks to another woman, and I jump in the ocean miles from land and expect to "swim away." Either I'm the best long-distance swimmer ever or I have a severe deathwish.

God I'm annoying.

[jynxfreak]

What an incredible coincidence; I seem to be just like that too!

[livilla]

Wow, this is getting freaky! I, too, seem to be angsty and annoying.

I think I need to go throw myself of a bridge now. Or a ship.

Excuse me. *splash*

[jynxfreak]

Why bother? Your/my ship's gonna sink anyway, isn't it?

[livilla]

Ah, good point. A pity.

Goodb-*gurgle*

Argh, Sues. Not happy, Jan.