Birthday Celebratory Rant (or, my victories over this den of lame trolls this past year)
So, today's my birthday. A time for self-reflection, and a chance to look back over our victories and defeats over the year.
I'm most pleased sad to say that many of the posts I've made to this com since I've joined have been mercilessly and cruelly spammed with pathetic, lamely written porn drabbles from a bunch of sick, twisted individuals that I ( Read more... )
I'm most pleased sad to say that many of the posts I've made to this com since I've joined have been mercilessly and cruelly spammed with pathetic, lamely written porn drabbles from a bunch of sick, twisted individuals that I ( Read more... )
She could never put this into words, what his hands did to her, what they made her feel about herself. The sensation of his warm palms against her waist and stomach made her strangely aware of those parts of her... how slender they were, without an inch of fat, and how he could easily span her waist with both hands. The roughness of his calluses, grown over years of sword fighting, drove home just how soft and smooth her own skin was, and somehow her paleness offset the slightly darker tan of Sephiroth's arms as they wrapped around her. His hands trailed upwards to cup her breasts; funny, she had always thought they were too small, and wished they could be bigger, and yet they fit so perfectly in her lover's hands like this...
Idly, she wondered what she looked like now, on her knees, slumped against Sephiroth's broad chest. Her mind, hazed with lust, summoned up the image for her... eyes clouded with desire, usually white cheeks flushed and rosy, and slender limbs entwined around the hard body behind her. Her throat went dry.
Beautiful.
"Ah! Ah!" she cried incoherently, unable to put what she was feeling into words... only able to sound out her joy, cry out every moment of pride and every thrust deep within her...
Suddenly, he withdrew completely, leaving her empty. The gasp of shock was almost a whimper as the warm solid sensation left her empty and aching. But before she could demand an explanation, she found herself being turned around, even as Sephiroth pressed her down on the floor. On her back, she stared up at her lover, poised between her shuddering legs. "Sephiroth?"
He smirked, only a faint sheen of sweat and his deep breaths betraying his own desire. "Sorry," he murmured. "I just wanted to watch you."
His words pierced her heart with the most exquisitely wonderful pain she could ever imagine, and tears rose unbidden in her eyes. "Oh Sephiroth...." she whispered tearfully. Then, "...oh ... oh...!!" as he slid inside her again, rocking against her in a faster, more passionate rhythm than before. Wrapping slender arms and legs around him, she matched his rhythm, pulling him close so she could feel his body against hers. Her fingers buried themselves in his hair and guided him down for a kiss, one that took her breath away.
She was so close, but she still stroked his back, clenching the muscles within her and feeling the answering rumble in her lover's chest. She only wished she could give him a fraction of what he gave her, this pleasure, this joy...
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One last thrust, deep into her body, and she climaxed, her orgasm exploding like the power she wielded so expertly. Her whole body seized as she threw back her head in ecstasy, damp black hair tossing back against the ground. She did not cry out, but the breath she inhaled shivered with barely restrained joy. As if to complete the moment, she heard the answering hiss from her lover, and Sephiroth shuddered in pleasure as he released himself within her.
Relaxing, they lay there together on the floor, utterly entangled, neither particularly interested in getting disentangled any time soon. Hotaru sighed happily, running her hands over Sephiroth's shoulders before stroking his cheek tenderly. He must have sensed there was more behind the gesture than usual, for he quirked an eyebrow.
Hotaru paused for a moment, before saying, simply, "... you make me feel beautiful."
Sephiroth's face was blank for a moment before relaxing into his usual arrogant smirk. "Idiot," he murmured gently, caressing her own cheek. "You are beautiful."
Again the wonderful heartache as she smiled and hugged him close...but more than just that in her chest. A spark of something... like the first lick of flame as a fire starts, something that had its start now and, if banked and encouraged, could only grow.
That spark was the thought that maybe, just maybe, Sephiroth was right.
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EAT IT, TROLL. And stop dancing in your icon! Don't you know only alliance races are worth playing? Stupid Hoardie.
I hope you like this. ;_; It's sort of directly inspired off the fic you wrote for my birthday, complete with Sephiroth calling Hotaru an "idiot" when she gets a bit low on self esteem. ;-) Hopefully in time I can muster up something for your other fandoms!
Although now that I think about it, I think I've had some exposure to Elfen Lied... via that webcomic, Nana's Everyday Life. Which utterly and totally depressed me to the point I was moping for days. XD
Anyway, Happy Birthday!
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Luckily, Sephiroth has rather different opinions and is going to literally screw them into her if he can. ;-)
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"Whore" you said? Ha! I'll show you a whore. A man-whore, to be specific. Or to be more specific, Sephiroth.
Damn you and your incredible ability to get into the characters' heads better than I could ever hope to! My porn may be "hot" at times, but you've got the beauty aspect of it down pat. It's been a long time since I've seen such an accurate depiction of Hotaru. And I liked how you worked the scene from my own fic in there. I'm really proud and touched to hear it left that much of an impression on you.
Ah, so you've seen that comic? Well, I'll warn you then. The actual anime? Probably less offensive all told, but in the end, more depressing.
Much more depressing. Especially when you see Lucy's childhood. Absolutely wonderful, don't get me wrong, but don't be surprised if you wind up bawling at some parts.
Though, I can see you writing a redemption fic for Lucy...
Well, that's all future. Now, I believe I promised you a certain foursome, no?
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Sephiroth was not entirely certain how he had gotten into this situation.
He recalled Hotaru standing between him and the other two women, insisting that, despite what they said, he was not evil, he was not trying to hurt anyone, and he was not here to drag "this Cloud person" as she'd called him, into the darkness. She'd demanded to know where they'd gotten these ideas.
When he'd explained to her precisely why the other two might think that way, she'd switched tactics and tried to convince them that he was no longer a threat to them or their loved ones.
They'd been rather shocked when she told them how she knew.
The conversation following that one had been filled with disbelief on their part, insistence on hers, and a combination of annoyance and amusement on his, right up until the brown haired, large-chested one (Tifa, he remembered) had said:
"You've got to be kidding me. That maniac wouldn't know romance if you hit him in the face with it. He probably can't even figure out how everything works, he's too busy trying to find ways to kill you with it!"
Sephiroth had been staying mostly quiet during the whole argument, but that comment had struck a nerve. If there was one thing he disliked, it was having his expertise in a given area he knew he was proficient in challenged.
"That sounds like a challenge, Lockheart."
And that brought them to the current position. The "challenge" as such, had been accepted. Sephiroth intended to prove his competency thoroughly. Tifa seemed a bit out-of-sorts now that she realized just that she'd gotten herself into, but she was far to driven and stubborn to back down. Hotaru was a bit put out by the thought of sharing her Sephiroth, but something Aeris said to her had convinced her to go along with this.
And so, all four of them were now quite naked.
It was fairly obvious that Sephiroth and Tifa still were considering this a "battle" of sorts. She had his hands pinned behind his head and her breasts shoved into his face, and he was more than happy to take advantage of the situation by striking at her with every trick he knew. Every groan and gasp he wrenched out of her was a victory for him.
Meanwhile, curled up practically in his lap, Hotaru had his length at her tender mercy. Sephiroth found himself twitching and growling more than once when she slid her tongue against him or stroked softly with her hands.
It was Aeris who's actions he still couldn't fathom. Tifa was doing this because she had no other way to prove his ineptness (which, he noted, she was failing miserably at), for Hotaru it was out of love and desire, but what were Aeris's motives? This was especially strange to Sephiroth because there didn't seem to be anyone she was focusing her attention on. One moment she could be toying with Sephiroth's chest, the next licking between Tifa's legs, and then (and this was really confusing Sephiroth) stroking Hotaru softly while whispering something into her ear.
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Aeris had simply smiled. "Tifa, I was helping you, not him. After all, who's the one who was just screaming her head off?"
"That's not the... not the point..." Tifa protested. "This was supposed to be a challenge... he had an unfair advantage."
"Oh, he did?" Aeris laughed. "Look down."
She did, as did Sephiroth. Straight into the eyes of Hotaru, who now had Sephiroth's length in a tight grip.
"Hotaru." Sephiroth gasped, then groaned as she stroked softly. "Yes, Hotaru..."
She didn't answer, but instead began to crawl up his body until her head touched his chin. She didn't let go of his cock, but instead positioned herself so that if she moved back down just a little, she'd slide straight onto him.
He waited, immobile, as she slowly, calmly began to take him into her, holding him with her hand as she slid down. When he was completely inside her, she lay back down on him, pressing her ear to his chest as though listening to his heartbeat.
It was then that Aeris lifted her up from behind, pulling Hotaru into a sitting position without moving her lower body. Hotaru smiled down at Sephiroth, placed her hands on his chest, and began to move.
This was not the first time they'd tried this position. He had always been fascinated by the way her tiny body bounced as she rode him, and would usually reach up to grab one of her breasts when she did this. But there was something decidedly different this time.
That something was Aeris, leaning into Hotaru from behind. One arm wrapped around her waist, supporting her. The other hand was exploring Hotaru's body.
Sephiroth could only watch in fascination as Aeris stroked Hotaru's thigh, ran a hand gently along her side, tweaked her nipple, licked her ear, a thousand other things that caused Hotaru to squeak, or squirm, or cry out. Hotaru leaned back into the other girl, moving a hand behind her to better support the new position.
When she began to pant deeper and louder, Sephiroth knew she was nearly there. Evidently, Aeris had figured this out too, because she moved her hand straight between Hotaru's legs.
Unlike Tifa, there was no long, drawn out scream. Hotaru simply stopped in her movements, hanging there for a moment as though time had paused for her, then collapsed onto Sephiroth, gasping for breath.
It was all he could do not to groan in frustration. He had been so very close, and now...
Wait. Hotaru was moving again. No, he realized. She was being moved. Her lower body was being lifted off his length to rest against him.
Then he felt a mouth close over him.
He didn't last long, but then, Aeris (for that was undoubtedly who was doing this, as Tifa and Hotaru were still collapsed against him) was obviously expecting that. At least, when he released, she made sure to keep her mouth on him until he was done.
Not too long after he felt Aeris left her mouth of him, she laid down next to him and ran her fingers through Hotaru's hair with an affectionate smile. Sephiroth turned to look at her, and she looked back at him.
There were a great deal of questions she wanted to ask him. He could see the confusion and thought in her face. But Aeris didn't say anything. She just smiled, and stroked Hotaru's hair.
Sephiroth wasn't about to press the issue.
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Argh, that was a pain to write, and I'm still not sure I got it correct, but I think it's as good as I'm gonna get it.
The problem is trying to match the picture Tifa and Aeris have of Sephiroth with the one we've made for him courtesy of Hotaru. It makes it really hard to get all four in bed together.
It came out better than I expected though. And I'm fairly certain this particular foursome has never before been written. Yay originality (of a sort)!
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Now I want to cry. ;_;
Argkjhakgjhgk NIIIIIIICE. That was totally awesome, not to mention hot. I LOVED how you set up Tifa and Sephiroth basically making a whole challenge out of the whole thing, so IC for both of them. And I would love to know exactly what Aeris whispered to Hotaru, or indeed what she was up to in this whole thing. Very cool mystery. ;-)
And I can totally sympathise with it being hard to write. Actually, to be honest, I don't think I could write Sephiroth/Hotaru as part of any sort of threesome/moresome just because... they're my OTP, you know? ^_^ In my own universe, I have Sephiroth as almost suicidally loyal and would rather remove his own testicles than be with anyone other than Hotaru. Yeeeaaah, he's obsessed. ;-) It felt really, really weird seeing them having sex with other people involved. XD
Not at all to diss your wonderful foursome, though! It was totally awesome. Just saying that I don't think I could ever write it, and... now I have a chance to think about it, I sort of prefer just Sephiroth/Hotaru together, just the two of them. Oddly enough, the same does not apply if Hotaru's not there; Aeris/Sephiroth/Tifa would be made of hot and win. I think it's just how I see Hotaru and Sephiroth's relationship, especially on Hotaru's end. Actually, I think I might be inspired to write a semi sequel to this fic and the one I wrote before, where Hotaru's feeling somewhat upset about "sharing" Sephiroth and worrying again about whether she's as beautiful as Aeris or Tifa... then Sephiroth cheers her up. ;-)
But thank you again for this lovely fic! It certainly is a foursome that's never been done before, and for that reason, I give you cookies and internet!
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Now, I'm using Kingdom Hearts canon rather than FF7, if that wasn't apparent, so Aeris has less of a reason to hate Sephiroth than she would otherwise, but she's still rather untrusting of him (naturally). As for why she'd be worried about someone she doesn't know... well, she's Aeris.
As for what she said to get Hotaru to go along with the idea, I'll leave that to your imagination. Along with what she was whispering to her during the act... Hey, those might make good points for a sequel, no?
In the end, though, I think you're right about this. This particular foursome, though sexy as all get out, really just wouldn't work, at least the way we've set things up. Maybe if Hotaru actually knew Aeris and Tifa, I could make it work, but that would require much more than a one shot. I do think, though, that Aeris and Hotaru would get along famously if they had a chance to get to know one another.
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As for Aeris, ah, that makes sense. I thought you were maybe setting it up for Aeris having feelings for Hotaru, hence all the affection. And I didn't realize this was KH canon, actually... you did a great job of making it work for either canon. ;-) Plus Aeris seems the type to not let silly little things like being murdered stand in the way of good sex and reconciliation. ^_^
I'm glad we feel the same way about the whole foursome thing, though. It makes me feel less guilty that I'm currently being nibbled by a monster of an angst!plotbunny about the aftermath of it. I'm currently about half way through, not sure when it will be done. But don't worry, it will all work out, and there will be smut. XD And I've got my own ideas about what might have been said... Of course, please don't take all that as me not liking your fic! And you're right, if they all knew each other before hand, there would be lots of getting along famously, and maybe even a bit of smut. I think I have some sort of weird hangup on group sex; I get all antsy when it's an established couple bringing in a third (or more) but if it's a scenario where they're all having sex for the first time together, sign me up. ;-)
By the way, on a TOTALLY unrelated note, which server of WoW are you on? I've recently shifted to Eldre'Thalas, so if you're on there, let me know and I'll bug you sometime. ^^ I even have Hotaru and Sephiroth lookalike alts (a 10 b elf priest and a 47 b elf paladin respectively)
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The whole Aeris/Hotaru undertones were basically a hint at what I can see between the two if they had more time to get to know each other. I can easily get the mental image of Hotaru looking up to Aeris, maybe even considering her a sort of mentor. It's not to hard to take that a step further, really.
As for WoW, I'm afraid the only server I'm really on is Khaz Modan, where I can be found as Kaltras (70 undead warlock), Galadrie (45 BE rogue), Wel Zen (10 troll mage), Theseuss (9 Tauren Shaman), or Saintfu (22 Dranei Paladin). I sort of have a character on Thorium Brotherhood, but I haven't technically started him yet.
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Like Hotaru. Which is why I wrote and wrote and finally disgorged a fic so long that I had to put it in my writing journal. It's a direct sequel to the foursome, but I feel really guilty for writing it as you put all this wonderful hard work into writing this delicious PWP... and then my Hotaru muse decided to get all hurt and bitter and upset just because of the line about her being "put out". And I'm the type that I HAVE to set things write via fic when that happens. XD So yes, big long Hotaru/Sephiroth fic with angst about the foursome, but fear not as everything ends up nice and smutty at the end. ;-) Maybe even hope for future Aeris/Hotaru friendship or more? ;-)
Ah, Khaz Modan is an RP server, isn't it? Dang, ah well. I really like Eldre'Thalas anyway... it's like I've come across some bizarro WoW where, rather than having a trade chat spammed with LOL LRN2PLAY NOOB and contested areas filled with bitchy Alliance ready to gank me with extreme prejudice... everyone seems to get along, the trade chat is filled with actual complete sentences, the guild I'm in is almost SCARILY nice and friendly, and the alliance just go about their business. It's AWESOME. XD
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Nope, Khaz is just a normal server, albeit a strangely quiet one. We have a few brain dead morons and such, but mostly we're nice and peaceful, if not too flashy (our server's strongest guild, which I am not in, is currently fighting Kael in The Eye, if I'm not mistaken).
Mostly though, I stay there because AMSlizrah and my brother (who lacks LJ and doesn't want one) are there.
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