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Forgive Me, First Love (1/?) | Percy Jackson/Heroes of Olympus | PG-13

Dec 17, 2010 22:00

Title: Forgive Me, First Love (1/?)
Fandom: Percy Jackson and the Olympians/Heroes of Olympus
Pairing: Jason/Annabeth, Percy/Annabeth, Piper/Jason, unrequited Nico/Percy, unrequited Leo/Jason
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: For The Lost Hero.
Word Count: 6000
Summary: Post TLH fic. CUE SPOILER WARNING RIGHT HERE. DO NOT READ ON IF YOU HAVE NOT READ THE ( Read more... )

fic, ship: piper/jason, fandom: heroes of olympus, fandom: percy jackson, ship: annabeth/percy, ship: leo/jason, ship: nico/percy, ship: annabeth/jason

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angel_2606 December 18 2010, 22:56:51 UTC

*squeals and dies*

Okay, when you said that you were working on more post-TLH fic, I knew it would be good. But THIS? HOLY SHIT! I was NOT expecting it to be this..........amazing, this awesome, this wonderful, and this heartbreaking. There were several times when my heart just broke for poor Annabeth, especially the moments with her and Jason where she can tell and is realizing that she likes him a bit, but she's so horribnly confused because she's in love with Percy.

Reading this put FAR too many images in my head. The one that stands out the most is one of Annabeth and Percy, and her telling him that she knows him, though he just scoffs at her, and in the midst of the two of them sparring, she lightly smacks him on the small of his back where his Achilles Heel spot is, saying something like "if I didn't know you, how did I know where your weak spot is?" And at some point later, she's horribly upset with herself for having done something like that. AND EGADS, I REALLY WANT TO SEE THIS WRITTEN BUT ACK, I DON'T KNOW IF I COULD DO IT JUSTICE. *FLAILS*

As for this fic though.........MOAR MOAR MOAR! And oh yes, MORE!

poptartmuse December 19 2010, 18:05:43 UTC

♥ ♥ YOU ARE LIKE, adorable. seriously. plan on moar heartbreak, but you know ;) GIRL ALL THESE IDEAS... IT'S LIKE, candyland for ideas. XDD

*writes feverishly*

angel_2606 December 19 2010, 18:09:59 UTC

Awwww, thank you, but I'm just being honest! It's the truth! I love this story!

*gulps* I'll definitely plan on moar heartbreak, with a raise of ANGST, yes/no/pickle? and LMAO! I've never heard of a whole swarm of ideas referred to as "candyland" but I'll have to remember that one for future reference. :D

WRITE WRITE WRITE!

I'm on AIM if you want to hop on to chat about ideas and all that. :)

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