[Fic] Nothing more than a smile

Dec 24, 2009 01:00



Title: Nothing more than a smile
Chapter: 1/1
Author: Pokky
Genre: Slice of life, romance
Pairing: ReitaxKai
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Bittersweet, not AU and OCxKai
Summary: A bright day, a bright occasion and Reita's gloomy eyes.
Note: This is a present-fic for my dear friend Peachy. It was due for the last July, but seems I'm very late xD

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peachysuju December 24 2009, 13:55:36 UTC
Ingenious! You told me it was bittersweet and I really liked it. As a birth gift I had to say a large thank you <3 The way you wrote the story make me feel how painful it's to see the one you cared about walk to the hotel. I appreciated every sentences and every details, I can almost feel how Reita was feeling at the view of the happiness of Kai. I always said you are an amazing writer but now I can claim the talent overflows in you !

Again, thank you, Reita and Kai is the best couple ever in Gazette (well in my head ^_^)

I love you Pokky, thank you to be such a good friend <3 (ps: malgré le fait que mon anniversaire était en juillet, je dois dire que l'attente n'a pas été vain.hihi!)

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pokky4ever December 31 2009, 02:52:40 UTC
hehe... I'm glad you think so!.. Et grâce à toi, j'ai très envie d'écrire beaucoup plus de ReitaxKai... It was really fun to write, and I also think they make a great pair together! Wait for another ReitaxKai! I'll send it to you when I'll be done with it!

Merci pour tes encouragements! ^_^

Thank you for reading and for the comment!

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waby_13 December 25 2009, 00:36:18 UTC
owww
owww
I'm amost crying

My god...
I hate Yuka, so, so much

Rei.......
waaa
poor thing
But the way you wrote this was... perfect...

Sorry for my childish comment!
Write more things! ReitaxKai please! It's my OTP!!

Take care!!
Bye bye

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pokky4ever December 31 2009, 02:54:12 UTC
Hehe, no worries, your comment wasn't childish! I'm actually happy you wrote it.. it motivates me more for writing about this pairing!

I'll definately be writing more ReitaxKai!

Thank you for reading and for the comment!

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k435y December 28 2009, 19:44:33 UTC
Wow. I'm happy for Kai, but sad for Reita at the same time. Such a confusing mixture, eh? XD
Thank you for sharing. ReitaxKai is one of the most awesomest pairings ever. XD

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pokky4ever December 31 2009, 02:55:39 UTC
Actually, I'm glad you feel happy for Kai and sad for Reita... It's the feeling I wanted to ignite in people who've read this! I agree with you, they make a good pair! It's just a little sad that not many people are into them... T_T

Thanks for reading and for the comment!

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strangled_kun January 12 2010, 19:51:36 UTC
I'm glad you wrote me to go read this, I thought you forgot me. Thanks.
I am really touched by the last sentence, I think maybe it's your choice of words, but it was touching, something that most real people tend to disregard. Bravo on writing about daily things.

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pokky4ever January 15 2010, 22:51:48 UTC
You know, your support brings so much to me. I'm glad but you talk as if we're never going to talk to each other again! O_o.. or maybe that's just me being weird...

Thank you for reading and for the comment!

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yutaka_no_drums February 11 2010, 10:02:05 UTC
=.=
This was.. really sad uU
I alsmost cried..
I mean it's nice that Kai found some nice girl to marry but Rei.. =.=
I am so sorry for him.. +coughs+ bittersweet.. that it truly is u_U"
But nonetheless I liked it a lot!!! Your style is easy to read. You know which words to choose!
I hope I will/can read more from you from this pair (since it's my unbeatable number one XD)

Thank you for this story =3

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pokky4ever February 15 2010, 14:34:16 UTC
^_^ your comment makes me smile! I'm happy to know that my writing is easy to read, since I did wanted people to feel bittersweet while reading this fic =D

I also hope I'll be able to write more about this pairing, and there's still something I don't quite get; why is it not so popular? O_o... I mean, look at how well they do suit each other!

Thank you for reading and for the comment!

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yutaka_no_drums February 16 2010, 12:33:36 UTC
Ahhhh~ I don't know either..
Because yes, yes they do perfectly fit with each other..
And look at all the interviews they did together. They have so much fun XD
So lovely XD Or the short video where they play uno XD""

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yutaka_no_drums February 16 2010, 13:03:21 UTC
O_O... a short video where they play uno??? Oh gosh, I missed that!
Do you happen to have a link ? xD that'll make my day! (could i add you? xD seems we'll be getting along well!)

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