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[pokemon_sues]

My internet connection is teh lame. fhkjsdfhkjsfdh :(

Eevee Week Series of Five or Six Eevee-Themed Reports, Part 3! Eeveelution of the Day...

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[ellenel13]

Why the fuck would a Jolteon need help because he was being attacked by Spearows? Electric>Flying.

[atlikarinca]

Sakura. Hikari.

Oh god. That's pretty bad. It screams 'SUE'

And lulz@ the suddenly wussy Fearow. Lulz at the entire fic, infact.

[blackjackrocket]

OK, I could see FEAROWs pecking at a Jolteon (it would have to be wounded or something, but still), but Spearows?

[puddinchan]

Cherry blossom... light? Is that it? I only picked up snippets of Japanese from anime, so, er... (I'm sure that's how many Sues get their names, however.)

Hospitals never close. So... Pokemon Centres shouldn't. The nurses surely have shifts, no?

[puddinchan]

Heh, yeah.

"Wapanese"? ._.

[anonymous]

Wow, this sue story managed to violate two very unrelated Sue rules in a "how to spot a Pokemon Sue" I read a while ago. One being the dumb idea of picking up a wounded animal(in this case, Jolteon) and running with it, which would only serve to injure it further, and the fact that Spearow seem to attack whoever they want, just for the hell of it. Quite an achievement.

Also: "Its eyes were a beauitful ruby red,"

Now, I haven't trained a Jolteon in a while, but....aren't their eyes black? I thought they were black!

[pokemon_sues]

Also Beedril. For some reason it's always either Spearow or Beedril.

[fuyuhime28]

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[anonymous]

Oh yeah, I forgot the guide also mentions Beedrill. I mean jeez, they're only protecting their young!