Fic : Drenched

[no1_jo]

Title: Drenched
Pairing: Eunhyuk/Kibum
Rating: PG
Warnings: Rain, symbolism,
Words: 357
Summary : Eunhyuk is sitting in the rain
Comments: For the 

Comments

[momiji_manjuu]

That wasn't crappy AT ALL! (Not that I ever thought it was - your writing is always gorgeous <3)

I repeat, yet again.. Such beautiful writing, I wish I could work with words the way you do, it's like you can just bend them to your will and they all fall happily into place.

I love this sentence..
"I bought them," holding up the long ruined bag as evidence of his statement, "they had all Donghae's favourites," a weak smile as he recalled the happy discovery, "but he's not here."
It goes from sounding happy (for the reader, at least) to being completely devastating in just a few words..

And that was sneaky, the way you snuck violins in there XD

[no1_jo]

Sorry really slow replying! But I'm killing my hair, but for now beating it into submission with hair straighteners ¬¬

Oooooh that bending them to my will thing was NICE, very fic-ish!! <3

LOL the vioilns I built around, cuz they either say Henry (but everyone will think that) or the 'worlds tiniest violin playing the worlds saddest song' sarcastic comment to me ^_^

and loves for liking it anyway (but i still hold it's not as good as the others :P)

<333333333

[momiji_manjuu]

Haha no worries, LJ isn't emailing me anything, so I'm having to try and remember everything I've commented on and check manually >_< *kicks it*

LOL why thank you XD

Yeah, I always get the worlds tiniest violin thing XD But normally I see someone playing it mockingly when someone is complaining about something unimportant, rather than it actually meaning sadness >_<

I'm REALLY liking that icon XDD I'm not quite sure WHAT They're doing, but I can't think of much that would bring them THAT close, and then cause THAT sort of face *stares* XDD

[no1_jo]

Stupid LJ, I HATE when it does that because I seriously rely on it an unhealthy amount :S *kicks it with you*

Pleasure XD I've decided to be dull ad uninteresting however to save myself for the streak :P

Yeah, that's true, it probably had something to do with the Korean drama I'm watching and they do love their cliché rain scenes.

LOL I wouldn't put it past Donghae tbh, he has some awesomely misinterprettable faces, and personal space means NOTHING to SuJu ^_~

[beevosteethos]

Ooooooh, a suprise one released! And, first off, it isn't crappy. SPAC!

So heavy, you'd almost fear to use an umbrella to protect yourself because it would just bend and buckle into some insane metal parody of modern art.
Love this. You're so good at this! <33

The kind of rain angsty dramas tried to create for the big emotional scenes as people cried and violins sang mournfully along with them,
Particularly in Kdramas, these scenes always have me sobbing in the corner. XDD

I love the last two paragraphs, particularly this:
When two soaked to the bone Super Junior members trudged solemnly back in the front door, a mixture of downtrodden lethargy and determined protectiveness radiating off them, no-one said a word. ♥♥♥

I know its getting redundant now, me saying it, but I really love your writing. <33

Like Vix said, crafty way of slipping the violins in there. *glomps*

[no1_jo]

LOL, I just do't hold my breah for non Jo-lovers (<3) for this one, cuz it really was a 15 min fill in cuz i wasn't finished :P

XDD and seriously I need to stop referencing art, at least 3 (though 2 not finshed yet) fics I've done that in now ^_^

Don't they!!! I blame the old guy cancer line I told you about, Bad Family defo has it's share of rain bits!!

*grin loves* and I still want a fic off you missy with that violin line i quoted in Vix's reply XDD

[beevosteethos]

Regardless, I still think this one is A+ Non Jo-lovers will love it, I'm sure.

*grin loves* and I still want a fic off you missy with that violin line i quoted in Vix's reply XDD
I'll tell you what, I'll stick it in the one I'm doing...somewhere, just for you, 'cos i AND HEARTS SEMICOLON you (code for this ♥ if you didn't get that) *glomps*

[no1_jo]

*clings to you*

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh does that mean you're doing one now? Is that why you're abandoning me on msn? 0______0

[no1_jo]

Awwww, you're so sweet ^_^
And yes!! I was wacthing some EunHae clips, and they're so much better together.
I'm starting to sound like a broken record, but it's really lovely that you're still commenting <3

[shinelikethesky]

What a coincidence that it's very cloudy here.
I liked the rain imagery <3, but poor Eunhyuk.

[no1_jo]

Very sorry for the slow reply but yes poor Eunhyuk!!! and thank you so much for commenting <3

[panda3035]

damn, this was a good piece. its touching

[no1_jo]

So so sorry for the slow reply and thank you very much for the lovely comment!! <3