Fic : Drenched

Apr 29, 2008 22:57

Title: Drenched
Pairing: Eunhyuk/Kibum
Rating: PG
Warnings: Rain, symbolism,
Words: 357
Summary : Eunhyuk is sitting in the rain
Comments: For the 
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eunhyuk, kibum, 100 suju fic challenge, super junior

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momiji_manjuu April 29 2008, 22:31:25 UTC
That wasn't crappy AT ALL! (Not that I ever thought it was - your writing is always gorgeous <3)

I repeat, yet again.. Such beautiful writing, I wish I could work with words the way you do, it's like you can just bend them to your will and they all fall happily into place.

I love this sentence..
"I bought them," holding up the long ruined bag as evidence of his statement, "they had all Donghae's favourites," a weak smile as he recalled the happy discovery, "but he's not here."
It goes from sounding happy (for the reader, at least) to being completely devastating in just a few words..

And that was sneaky, the way you snuck violins in there XD

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no1_jo April 29 2008, 22:55:09 UTC
Sorry really slow replying! But I'm killing my hair, but for now beating it into submission with hair straighteners ¬¬

Oooooh that bending them to my will thing was NICE, very fic-ish!! <3

LOL the vioilns I built around, cuz they either say Henry (but everyone will think that) or the 'worlds tiniest violin playing the worlds saddest song' sarcastic comment to me ^_^

and loves for liking it anyway (but i still hold it's not as good as the others :P)

<333333333

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momiji_manjuu April 30 2008, 21:00:03 UTC
Haha no worries, LJ isn't emailing me anything, so I'm having to try and remember everything I've commented on and check manually >_< *kicks it*

LOL why thank you XD

Yeah, I always get the worlds tiniest violin thing XD But normally I see someone playing it mockingly when someone is complaining about something unimportant, rather than it actually meaning sadness >_<

I'm REALLY liking that icon XDD I'm not quite sure WHAT They're doing, but I can't think of much that would bring them THAT close, and then cause THAT sort of face *stares* XDD

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no1_jo April 30 2008, 21:35:55 UTC
Stupid LJ, I HATE when it does that because I seriously rely on it an unhealthy amount :S *kicks it with you*

Pleasure XD I've decided to be dull ad uninteresting however to save myself for the streak :P

Yeah, that's true, it probably had something to do with the Korean drama I'm watching and they do love their cliché rain scenes.

LOL I wouldn't put it past Donghae tbh, he has some awesomely misinterprettable faces, and personal space means NOTHING to SuJu ^_~

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momiji_manjuu April 30 2008, 22:06:08 UTC
Me too! I didn't realise how much I relied on it... Does it normally last very long?

Ooh which drama? The only Korean drama I have is Winter Sonata.. People only seem to flail about the Japanese ones, that I've seen at least.. But I've heard that often Korean actors are much better than the Japanese.

Oooh I like the sound of that XD (the personal space thing)

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no1_jo April 30 2008, 22:16:20 UTC
Umm when it happened to hotmail, it happened to everyone cuz they'd blocked it or something but people complained ad they brought it back so I really have no idea :S

The Bad Family one I tolf you about, an Korean dramas i've not seen much of but everyone says (and i totally believe them after watchin some) they're a bit samily melodramatic and emo, so you need to spread them out a bi :S

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momiji_manjuu April 30 2008, 22:21:38 UTC
Oh that sucks.. I might see if I can set it up with googlemail instead, see if that fixes it..

Ohh I see! I wondered what that was, I just thought it was some normal british TV show i'd missed XD
I like some melodrama, but, yeah.. not all the time >_

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no1_jo April 30 2008, 23:00:42 UTC
:S maybe, but I've heard people get problems with that too sometimes :S

Ohhhhhh sorry, didn't I mention i wsa watching for Heechul gorgeousness? :S

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*jumps in* beevosteethos April 30 2008, 22:26:22 UTC
Jo's right, you DO have to spread the Korean dramas out. OMFG they are heartwrenching if you find one that completely pulls you in. They make that melodrama so thick, you're sobbing at the computer.

My rec would be My Girl (its on jdramas) (with Lee Junki <33) because I adored it to death and back. That or Delightful Girl.
Regardless, Kdrama should be poked about in. The Japanese may do fantastic crack but I have yet to see a Jdrama kill me for 17 (possibly a litte less) episodes like My Girl did.

.... and I'm rambling

...and your Uruha icon is made of complete love, I keep staring at it - I LOVE THAT EXPRESSION!! SO SEXY!! *dies*

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Re: *jumps in* no1_jo April 30 2008, 22:28:10 UTC
Jo is always right sneaky-junper-in-er, the sooner you learn this the easier life will be *smug face*

\end channeling iris

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Re: *jumps in* momiji_manjuu April 30 2008, 22:32:16 UTC
LOL that comment cracked me up XDD You're so awful <333

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Re: *jumps in* no1_jo April 30 2008, 22:34:24 UTC
Mwahahaha ain't I a stinker? :P

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Re: *jumps in* momiji_manjuu April 30 2008, 22:40:45 UTC
I approve.

As does Sho.

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Re: *jumps in* no1_jo April 30 2008, 22:42:35 UTC
Yay XD

Tho i feel his eyes are judging me as he does 0_____0

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Re: *jumps in* momiji_manjuu April 30 2008, 22:48:03 UTC
*tilts head* It could always be taken as an approving 'checking you out' kind of stare..

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*jumps ON!* beevosteethos April 30 2008, 22:32:53 UTC
LOL!! Spacatron!! /comment waffle

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