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Fic : A Diamond in the Rough

Jul 21, 2008 19:26

Title: A Diamond in the Rough
Pairing: Heechul/Eunhyuk
Rating: PG-15
Warnings: AU, implied sex activites, harems
Words: 1,549
Summary: Being Prince to a desert kingdom is tedious work, unless you have an 'attendant' to amuse you ^_~
Comments: For the
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heechul, eunhyuk, suju, 100 suju fic challenge

Comments 5

karadin July 22 2008, 00:41:14 UTC

Ohh, very lush and decadent, and a surprise ending! Thanks for posting.

no1_jo July 22 2008, 11:31:30 UTC

Thank yu very much XDD I'm such a sucker for ending twists (and death apparently :P)

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no1_jo July 22 2008, 11:32:19 UTC

Great stuff XDD

momijinosekai July 22 2008, 05:50:39 UTC

As I said before, I love how pissed off Heechul is because of the heat - especially that it's the heat that messes up his appearance XD Such a princess

He was positive that the horrible masses of muscle and no brain were trying on purpose to irritate him by exuding such temperatures
AHHAHAHAHA So sure that anything done is done to spite him! It's very clever how you took his being annoyed and used it to show just how self-centred he is, though XD

a world of dirt and disease and inelegance hardly befitting of his noble status
And if we didn't get it from that last bit, this certainly cleared everything up XD

when during bathing one day he discovered Eunhyuk's dick to be bigger than his
LMFAO!! This cracked me up when I was reading it (I actually snorted X_x), but I wanted to save something to comment on in here XDD So hilarious <333

In his own twisted, internalised way, he loved him.
Ahww.. Despite it being an unhealthy kind of 'love', it's still incredibly sweet. And makes the ending even more heartbreaking >__<

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no1_jo July 22 2008, 11:42:47 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAHA but seriously like I said, i could go on for YEARS ranting about how much I hate the heat so trnasferringit to Heechul is easy peasy ^_^

This is truefax!!! All annoyances are personal slight's against Heechul!! :P

YAY thank you!!! So glad that bit was funny!! and I will consider it for a fill in fic, cuz what Heechul gets Eunhyk d to be forgiven should be interesting XDD

Isn't it!! I swear I feel too much for my characters and crush their sweet relationships far too often, but also <3 that the underlying sweetness got through ^_^

I really do love that end, that he wouldn't even hestitate in doing his job to punish his fathers killer despite this being his only real relationship and I must be watchin too many dramas...

OMG yes!!! Yours however is gloriously fabulous!!! ♥

and it's SO weird btw to see all these different icons! :P