Fic : A Diamond in the Rough

[no1_jo]

Title: A Diamond in the Rough
Pairing: Heechul/Eunhyuk
Rating: PG-15
Warnings: AU, implied sex activites, harems
Words: 1,549
Summary: Being Prince to a desert kingdom is tedious work, unless you have an 'attendant' to amuse you ^_~
Comments: For the 

Comments

[momijinosekai]

As I said before, I love how pissed off Heechul is because of the heat - especially that it's the heat that messes up his appearance XD Such a princess

He was positive that the horrible masses of muscle and no brain were trying on purpose to irritate him by exuding such temperatures
AHHAHAHAHA So sure that anything done is done to spite him! It's very clever how you took his being annoyed and used it to show just how self-centred he is, though XD

a world of dirt and disease and inelegance hardly befitting of his noble status
And if we didn't get it from that last bit, this certainly cleared everything up XD

when during bathing one day he discovered Eunhyuk's dick to be bigger than his
LMFAO!! This cracked me up when I was reading it (I actually snorted X_x), but I wanted to save something to comment on in here XDD So hilarious <333

In his own twisted, internalised way, he loved him.
Ahww.. Despite it being an unhealthy kind of 'love', it's still incredibly sweet. And makes the ending even more heartbreaking >__<

In Heechul's mind it was a hate filled hiss with which he spoke, detest colouring every syllable as he spat his words in the others fate, but in reality it was not so.

His voice cracked, disappointment and despair thickening his words, tears clouding his vision as he did what he had to do.
*sobs* Those two lines are just amazing.. I don't even have the words.. they make my chest hurt x_X

LOVE this. I shall repeat it until I feel like I've said it as much as I love it XD You manage to convey so much so quickly, give us a whole new universe in such a short space of time, but it doesn't feel gappy - more like I WANT to read more because I'm intrigued, not because I don't understand or follow anything. And despite Heechul's almost painful self-centredness, you can't help but like him, so it makes it all the worse..

LOVE. <33333 And those two rather lame comments up there certainly don't do it justice.

[no1_jo]

HAHAHAHAHAHA but seriously like I said, i could go on for YEARS ranting about how much I hate the heat so trnasferringit to Heechul is easy peasy ^_^

This is truefax!!! All annoyances are personal slight's against Heechul!! :P

YAY thank you!!! So glad that bit was funny!! and I will consider it for a fill in fic, cuz what Heechul gets Eunhyk d to be forgiven should be interesting XDD

Isn't it!! I swear I feel too much for my characters and crush their sweet relationships far too often, but also <3 that the underlying sweetness got through ^_^

I really do love that end, that he wouldn't even hestitate in doing his job to punish his fathers killer despite this being his only real relationship and I must be watchin too many dramas...

OMG yes!!! Yours however is gloriously fabulous!!! ♥

and it's SO weird btw to see all these different icons! :P