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The American Scheme of Things
The “American Dream” that Willy Loman is trying to achieve, in one sense or another throughout Arthur Miller’s “Death of A Salesman”, does not exist. It is a myth created by the American government and supported by the marketing industry. It was developed as a way to get people to come to this country and “become ( Read more... )
haha. i wouldn't say that, even though its true.
Matt i like this essay. I love where you're coming from and the point you're making. But there's some things i would change. For exaplme, dont start a paragraph with a quote. A paragraph must be introduced and concluded with the same summarization of what the paragraph is about. Also, refrain from using "to be" verbs. You've got a lot of them. "are", "is", "am", and all the past forms of it will not be tolerated by her. Also, do not use questions or conjunctions in your paper.
And another HUGE thing is that you don't have any quotes from the book. The assignment of the paper is to relate the play to the american dream. This should be evident in your thesis. It seems to me like you're just using the play as a base from which to bash democracy and capitalism, which is all fine and dandy if you're talking to someone. But for this specific paper, you need quotes from the book to back up the relationship between the play and the dream.
I'm sorry you don't have more time to fix it all.
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