Happy Birthday, Ron!

Mar 12, 2010 16:04

Title: Happy Birthday, Ron!
Author: pili204
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Rating: PG
Word Count: 627
Date Published: March 12, 2010
Author's Note: Written as a birthday gift for my friend honourweasley12

Happy Birthday, Ron! )

ron/hermione, rated pg, 2010, ficlet

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honourweasley12 March 13 2010, 01:50:23 UTC
Thank you, Pili!!! This was amazing, so many different emotions perfectly captured in this. From the adorableness of the kids, to the melancholy and gratefulness Ron feels upon his reflection, to Hermione's support, and finally, to the fun and loving family, you truly captured a beautiful moment.

Thanks again, you have no idea what this truly means to me!!

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pili204 March 14 2010, 23:31:01 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed this little tale. Thanks for the awesome comment!

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honourweasley12 March 15 2010, 06:34:31 UTC
I enjoyed it tremendously! Thanks again for the thoughtful gift, my friend! :)

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aloemilk March 13 2010, 02:07:36 UTC
Ooooh, I loved this *_*
Ron thanking Fred made me want to weep... and how they all just ate what could be saved from the cake made me smile widely!!

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pili204 March 14 2010, 23:31:27 UTC
:) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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mollywheezy March 13 2010, 14:05:58 UTC
Wonderful ficlet! Hugo and Rose are so cute in their Ron-ness, and Hermione's desire for everything to be perfect for Ron.

Ron's realisation of what Fred sacrificed was truly beautiful.

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pili204 March 14 2010, 23:32:13 UTC
I'm sure the kids will take after Ron, he can be a big-kid after all. :)

I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

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missgranger2 March 13 2010, 14:19:29 UTC
It had a bit of all the elements I like in a story-laughter, angst, love and a happy ending. *sighs* I love daddy Ron as much as I adore your writing! You're brilliant as always. (>:

XXX

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pili204 March 14 2010, 23:32:53 UTC
You're an amazing reviewer. Thanks so much!!

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heart_eyes23 June 18 2010, 16:07:21 UTC
This made me hurt and then it made me smile. I liked Ron's melancholy: he's a hidden thoughtful one. Hugo and his Ron-ness made me smile. I also liked Hermione and her steadiness and growth in this, it's very in line with the wonderful girl we see in canon.

Great, great job!!:)

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