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[pigsta]

hey guys... i was just sitting here... and thinkin, here's an attempt at writing a poem... comment guys and tell me wat ya think

Comments

[miss_sexy_thang]

i would agree except for the fact i hate love most the time... love=pain even when everything is well... when u really love someone it hurts and it takes over your life and its the only thing in your mind... my dad told me something the other day, he said "your the only one who can make you happy because it is all in your mind... no other person can complete your life because you are born complete and it is up to you what mind state you want to live it in and all you really need is to love yourself." love is like a drug, u get addicted and then you depend on it and once you get hooked theres no way to go back 100 percent. you always want to come back for more because now that uv tried it u can't get enough even when it hurts. love just plays with your mind. it makes you think differently, but theres nothing you can do because you've already got urself into it.

yeah sorry its so long, but i got into it... by the way its a good poem. <3333

[pigsta]

no doubt about you being the greatest person ever ;) however i agree that love is a drug, but then again, what isnt like a drug? if u think about it, everything that makes a person feel good is addictive, its just in out nature.

[miss_sexy_thang]

naw not everything... love is different... its stronger

true dat.

[wordsmyth]

'nuff said.
you got it all man...awesome.

(bigfoot saves!)
~micah

Re: true dat.

[pigsta]

live for big foot, YAY!

[anonymous]

yo man its david, i told u online but just thought id repost that poem is fucking awesome man...that seriously is some of the best shit ive read, actually has meaning oppossed to all that crap i normally have to read for English that doesn't make any sense that they tell us is good :). You got it down to a nail thats exactly how it can feel sometimes.

[pigsta]

thanks dude :)

[nettekarma]

OMG total teardrop. that was absolutely beautiful Alex. i am proud of you, u actually made me react to a poem and that takes a lot. i hope things get better for you and know that i am here for you if you ever need a hug. please keep writing it is trully a thing of beauty.

What?

[anonymous]

Ok, so, it's another poem about love. Whateva. Here's MY poem:

Love Sucks
It sometimes blows
Loves that somethin
Makin you feel alright
Love is your Honey
Late at night

~The Black Rose

Now THAT is a poem. Eat your heart out Romeo.

Re: What?

[pigsta]

who are u?

What?

[anonymous]

I'm an annoynomous stranger, you ass cock, can't you read?

~The Black Rose
~The Devil Child
~God~

Re: What?

[anonymous]

By the way, Arod...hm. I lose my train of thought. Oh well...