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[philippa_]

I had a little time on my hands and decided to use it to do some writing.

Title: Not enough
Rating: PG-13
Beta: none
Summary: Post "The Truth." Ryan isn't dealing with the fact that nobody trusted him over the Oliver drama quite as well as Sandy was hoping.

Comments

[60schic]

What fred said! Excellent job. I love the grasp you have on the characters, how believable their thoughts and feelings from this episode are. I so enjoyed Sandy finally understanding how hurt Ryan is.

He wasn’t in the mood for Seth’s latest Summer drama. Seth would just have to deal with it himself. If he wasn’t going to pay Ryan attention and listen when something of actual importance was being raised in conversation, then he wasn’t going to listen to him in return....how I wish we had seen this in canon!

he held the container still again as his stomach once again made a flight plan.....loved this phrasing.

I would like to see you write the conversation between Sandy and Kirsten---a true missing scene if ever there was one.

[malinr]

I would like to see that missing scene too. Pretty please Philippa would you write it? Love this story. Hugs

[philippa_]

Thank you.

I can't promise anything about the sequal. I have exams coming up but once they are over, I'll try and have a go.

[malinr]

God luck on your exams. Hugs

[philippa_]

Aww thank you *hugs*

[philippa_]

Thanks, I'm so glad that you thought I had a good grasp on the characters.

It would have been nice to see Ryan getting just a little annoyed at Seth for his selfishness.

A few people have mentioned maybe doing a sequal. We shall see. I'm in exam time at the moment though so I can't promise anything.