Day 29 MN: Ruby POV

[pheebs1]

Day 29: Words: 1082.
Will add up again and post final overall tally with Day 30.

Outside POV: Ruby. Post 3.07 (so spoilery), what is Ruby's next move?
Sam/Ruby. PG13.

Comments

[killmotion]

You've got Ruby done really well. I can totally imagine her and Sam having this conversation for real.

[pheebs1]

Aw,yay thank you! I am glad Ruby felt like, well, Ruby to you! Thank you!

[iamstealthyone]

Good Ruby voice here, the way she feels utterly in control and is flirtatious and edgy with such ease.

Favorite lines:

Ruby watches Sam from afar, careful to avoid his gaze. She's a flash of blonde hair in the corner of his eye, the whispers in the night.

I really like how you phrased this.

She can taste the anger and disgust bubbling inside him like water on the boil.

Good analogy.

[pheebs1]

Thank you very much - I am glad Ruby sounds like her. And you picked two of my favourite phrases, so, hurrah!!!

[weesta]

Right on! I strongly fear that this is the road Ruby's leading Sam down...I fear where it may lead. Oh Sam!

[pheebs1]

I know~ Sammy!!! Noooooooooo. And thank you love, I am happy you liked it.

[kellifer_fic]

Ooooooh... *big eyes*

[pheebs1]

Hee. I take it that means you liked it?! Hee. Thank you.

[alphabet26]

Dude. Dude. That was amazing. I really like your Ruby voice and POV. Her view of Sam was intriguing, and I loved the hints of her big master plan. Great job.

[pheebs1]

Oh hon. Gosh. Thank you. I am glad this worked as Ruby. I really appreciate hearing that.