You know I did this for a kink meme comm which will remain nameless for the m. I was told my work was stilted, disfluent (which isn't a word) and wooden. Tell me if you think so. I have no problem improving when it is concrit it's asshole snobbery I don't care for. The requester here asked for Luck/Eve, first time. Preferably with Eve as the
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