an exerpt from my 5 page short story

Oct 01, 2003 20:00

So I left. Right then and there. I viscously stabbed the table with the fork that I held in my hand. I stood up the quickest I had ever stood before, yanking my place-mat off the table. It took all the might in the world to walk out that door, to walk out on my most beloved possession anywhere. Once I was outside, I could see everything. It was as ( Read more... )

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sorry strudal squizit October 1 2003, 19:55:18 UTC
i have the effect on people.

haha jk, but really. it's good.

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greeneggzandsam October 2 2003, 14:14:52 UTC
drew, you are a talented writer! i never knew;
keep writing, i want to read more

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godspeedyou October 2 2003, 20:42:12 UTC
"They must be retarded. Although I have never seen a mentally retarded person run a marathon before, or even heard of one. Maybe im wrong, but what does it matter, I don’t really care
anyway"

Drew,

We are all now retarded for reading that. Thank you.

D+

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