Ohoh

[perimyndith]

Ohoh. I found a plot hole in the Novel. Or rather, a thread of plot that appears in chapters 3-5, where a Big Deal is made of it, and then is subsequently forgotten. Ohohoh. This is the problem with spur-of-the-moment ideas. They solve one problem but create two more

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[c_dragon]

:P

[perimyndith]

ROTFL.

[jenwrites]

Two pages sounds unnecessarily cruel.