SO I submitted my poem to the writing workshop...did the critique tonight

AND THEY LIKED IT! Still some fine tuning needed, but I can sleep soundly knowing that I'm not wasting my time writing and have gotten compliments from people without any obligation whatsoever to be nice to me.

Lament of the Next Best Thing ( Read more... )

So for my writing seminar my assignment is to write a poem in the style of Mark Doty, the poet we've been studying and then write a paper explaining how we mimiced his style... SO here I submit to you: critique is welcomed, esp if you're familiar with Doty's work ( Read more... )

F is for fatidic.
From god's lips to your ear.
Perched like a gargoyle against the
evening's alenglow, reading Neruda
in Spanish to the twilight and to
me Si me dejaras muriendo oh ( Read more... )

Hopefully the formatting will work...Nevermind...it won't ( Read more... )