Chekov/Sulu, HSAU for the kink meme

[paytofay]

Title: Text Me
Pairing: Chekov/Sulu
Summary: High School AU for this prompt: ...sexting. And then afterward, they actually ~do it~. 6K
Rating: NC-17
Other: Underage Sexing! My first strictly Sulu/Chekov! Lame title! Thanks to flwrpwr_vampyre for the beta!

Comments

[kinkme]

Dear lord I think I'm dead.

That was brilliant. The hot, hot sex and the teenage urgency of it. Desperation on both ends, and little geeky Pavel. I also like Sulu's characterisation in this, cool and suave (from Chekov's POV anyway), and it works perfectly. I adore how Pavel has some confidence and messages him and how eager he is -- at some points I could SEE his smile. You created an awesome universe that fits deliciously and so IC.

And of course, omg, hottttt.

Love this fic! AND IT'S YOUR FIRST STRICTLY CHEKOV/SULU? Way to lose your Chulu virginity, fuck. o_o

[paytofay]

Thank you so much!! I really didn't mean to turn Sulu into Rico Suave, but he kept bending that way and I couldn't resist!

Yes, oddly I lost my trek-slash v-card with a scotty threesome; I wouldn't've had it any other way:x Thanks so much for reading and commenting!!

[salt_of_the_egg]

This is awesome! So hot, and the butterflies Pavel gets are so easy to relate to kfjsk;dlfh sexting, wow.

Well done!

[paytofay]

Aww, thanks, that was definitely my intention! thanks so much for the comment:)

[hollycomb]

I don't think I can adequately express how much I enjoyed this fic. It has put the biggest smile on my face this morning! So incredibly hot, and you just had their characters down SO PERFECTLY, guhhh, everything they say sounds like them but also like high school boys, and it's just ... amazing! Hikaru was just the hottest thing ever, and adorable Pavel alone in his mansion with his Polo shirts ...!! and this I think was somehow the hottest moment for me:

“Shit,” he groans, in RussianThat innocent little Pavel has this like dark Russian underbelly that comes out when he's really overwhelmed with pleasure omggggg and I just pretty much died when Hikaru tells Pavel to get back to the bed so they can cuddle ;____; guhh that whole scene with them writhing against each other under the blankets was just the most romantic thing ever

[paytofay]

oof! I wish I could crank out the fic like that--

HEY WAIT A MINUTE speaking of HS adventures! I miss goth!Pavel! Don't think we've forgotten!

[ninfomana]

I second this whole comment!

I HAVE DIED OF INTENSE CUTENESS OVERLOAD.

*is hoping for wolfish!Jim encounters and Chekov's WTF, GTFO*

[paytofay]

I LOVE dirty!texts. I love how they're basically mini-erotica, like sexy twitter! so they were a joy to write hahah, as well as geeky Pavel; he's such a guilty pleasure of mine. Thank you so much for your comment; it puts a smile on my face like you wouldn't believe!

[echoinautumn]

All right, I'll confess to being the OP for this prompt, and I'll also confess that I in no way expected anything like this. I think I expected something rushed and silly, but not... this. I am so endlessly thrilled at how amazing this is, and I have a huge grin on my face just from reading it. Definitely a favorite and thank you so, so much both for writing this prompt and for making it so perfect.

[paytofay]

jkdls;ajks thank you for this prompt then! I immediately had to write it and can't believe no one had requested it before; there's such a cool dynamic between essentially faceless messaging that I couldn't resist:| Thank you so much for the comment! and the prompt! again!

[echoinautumn]

No, no, thank you :D I've reread this about five times today and each time I keep seeing things that make me even more gleeful. I can't even form a coherent response--I love the whole thing with my whole heart. I love geeky!Chekov, and for a while I had this sinking fear that his pictures and texts were going to end up all over the school, but somehow forgot that it's Sulu and of course those things wouldn't happen! I have to reiterate everything hollycomb said (she says it so much better). I got such a happy rush from reading this and thank you for reading this.

ALSO I AM REALLY EXCITED THAT YOU ARE PLANNING TO WRITE MORE HSAU.

[echoinautumn]

WRITING. WRITING IT. AUGH. WHAT IS WRONG WITH MY BRAIN TODAY.