Chekov/Sulu, HSAU for the kink meme

Feb 28, 2010 02:43

Title: Text Me
Pairing: Chekov/Sulu
Summary: High School AU for this prompt: ...sexting. And then afterward, they actually ~do it~. 6K
Rating: NC-17
Other: Underage Sexing! My first strictly Sulu/Chekov! Lame title! Thanks to flwrpwr_vampyre for the beta!

Don't leave me haaanging on the teeelephone )

hsau, star trek, chekov/sulu, fic

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hollycomb February 28 2010, 16:01:33 UTC
I don't think I can adequately express how much I enjoyed this fic. It has put the biggest smile on my face this morning! So incredibly hot, and you just had their characters down SO PERFECTLY, guhhh, everything they say sounds like them but also like high school boys, and it's just ... amazing! Hikaru was just the hottest thing ever, and adorable Pavel alone in his mansion with his Polo shirts ...!! and this I think was somehow the hottest moment for me:

“Shit,” he groans, in RussianThat innocent little Pavel has this like dark Russian underbelly that comes out when he's really overwhelmed with pleasure omggggg and I just pretty much died when Hikaru tells Pavel to get back to the bed so they can cuddle ;____; guhh that whole scene with them writhing against each other under the blankets was just the most romantic thing ever ( ... )

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paytofay February 28 2010, 20:36:00 UTC
oof! I wish I could crank out the fic like that--

HEY WAIT A MINUTE speaking of HS adventures! I miss goth!Pavel! Don't think we've forgotten!

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ninfomana February 28 2010, 18:16:49 UTC
I second this whole comment!

I HAVE DIED OF INTENSE CUTENESS OVERLOAD.

*is hoping for wolfish!Jim encounters and Chekov's WTF, GTFO*

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paytofay February 28 2010, 20:36:47 UTC
Aww thank you so much! I appreciate it:D hahahah omg I just might; be on the lookout for stupid amounts of HSAU from me ;___;

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ninfomana March 1 2010, 22:52:31 UTC
REALLLYYY?! I am dancing!
*is gleeful*

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paytofay February 28 2010, 20:34:10 UTC
I got a review from hollycomb I got a review from hollycomb I got a review from hollycomb *hyperventilates*

I'm so glad to hear they were in character; I have this weird over-reaching fanon perception of them as teens and I was afraid it would be too much at times! but this idea of Pavel as a terribly nerdy Real-Genius type dork who has this completely vulnerable sexual side speaks to me infinitelyyy

and yes yes I am so addicted to romance and fluffiness with this pairing, and I of course entirely lifted the idea of Jim-on-the-prowl and jealous Sulu from you I hope you don't mind ;_____;

and oh man I have at least three HSAUs that are in the works but I'm afraid I might overdo it ahaha. THANK YOU SO MUCH for the long comment it means a lot to me! And for reading, of course :D!

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