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Sordid Affairs 27/?

Jul 20, 2009 15:23

Title: Sordid Affairs
Author: outuendo_11
Rating: PG-13
Show: Guiding Light
Pairing: Spolfe, Mactalia
Spoilers: um...no.
Summary: Olivia and Natalia struggle to make their relationship work with Rafe at home and Olivia finds a confidant in Doris Wolfe.
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gagawgirls July 20 2009, 20:43:48 UTC

Whoo-hoo! Another chapter... LOVE Mackenzie and Natalia. And Olivia and Doris...well...hot!

Thanks!! More, more, more!

Was that too pushy? ;)

ritarob July 20 2009, 20:49:48 UTC

Oooh...things are hotting up on a lot of fronts now...Derek back on the scene...what's he up to me wonders?! Then, poor little Olivia....I have to say that something need to move there, as they were sounding like the prozac family...lol. Of course what does this whole heart problem mean in the long run...it has to mean something in the big scheme of things?! And our little Natalia showing *ahem* signs of how into Makenzie she is.:-) It still saddens me that Otalia are not together and lines like 'it wasn't the longing, distant kiss that she had shared with Olivia' only make me sad :-( As for the 40 chapters...I think I can hold out until the end :-)

aeryn_ryker July 20 2009, 20:49:55 UTC

LOVED IT! i was so bored this weekend w/o an update of this. oh how i love your doris!

abilena July 20 2009, 22:48:17 UTC

This was a great chapter. Loved the Mackenzie/Natalia part.....what a kiss. Also loved that Emma held Ashlee's hand while they looked out the window waiting for Ashlee's date to arrive. And also when Emma teased her mom about kissing doris. Looking forward to more. 40 chapters huh....that's almost, (if not already) an epic ;-)

vjb2006 July 21 2009, 02:40:43 UTC

Still like the way this is moving forward - Natalia losing a couple of inhibitions and Doris finding out first hand what it is like to have a heart patient on your hands who has no patience with her own body's demands... Not so sure I'm going to like Derek after the date thought, just a feeling. Am sure I am just find with this moving along towards chapter 40 though ;)