cause lee liked it <3

[pardonthelitany]

Lies Mothers tell Daughters: #1, independence

When he met me,
he smiled
his eyes lighting up.He looked so beautiful-just the sight of it
made me return the grin.i said to myself- i said -this is the smile
i could come home to every night, wake up
to every morning. this is the smile i would
work for - our breaths heaving together -
our skins pressed - (

Comments

[moonu_uwalker]

the abstract existance of this piece reminds me of things forgotten, forgotten for survival's sake, forgotten to cease the hate, the pain, the anger, the grief. the simple existance of this piece reminds me of a path once chased. and then there's the content in and of it's self, and that sweeps me away too.

[pardonthelitany]

wow, that's a lovely thing to say about anyone's poetry. i appreciate the compliment, and i'm glad you liked it. it's been a long time since i've written much poetry; i'm glad it doesn't suck.