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Shutter - Umi x Rui - Chapter 01/?

Jan 07, 2012 02:55

Title: Shutter
Chapters: 01/?
Author: paranoiascreams
Genre: Angst, Drama
Warning: unbeta'd
Rating: PG-13
Pairings/Characters: main!umixrui, onesided Umi x Tohya, Tomo x Rui
Synopsis: Everytime Tohya gets closer to Umi, Rui gets paranoid and turns to an over jealous boyfriend and it's taking a toll on everyone. (sucky synopsis, i know.)
Disclaimer: I own nobody ( Read more... )

pairing: umi x tohya, length: chaptered, band: vistlip, pairing: umi x rui, title: shutter, pairing: tomo x rui, !fanfiction

Comments 7

silveryxdark January 6 2012, 23:26:26 UTC

My heart has been broken. TwT This is a good thing, story-wise, but MY HEART IS STILL BROKEN. D: I feel so, so bad for all of them. And the last part is... no, just no I don't want that D: But I like the story and you write so well :D Also, poor Tohya and Tomo T.T Jealous!Rui is scary and aww Umi's pretty understanding and Yuh is... cool. :3 Keep up the good work bby!

paranoiascreams January 7 2012, 18:23:34 UTC

*hugs you tight*

It's a little if not too out of character of Rui, but my sister wanted an obsessed and possessive Rui for this. haha.

i am actually streesed with this story. the arguments are pretty stressful. i'll try updating soon~

chuchumasu January 7 2012, 15:35:25 UTC

awwwww

paranoiascreams January 7 2012, 19:09:56 UTC

salamat 'nak.

seryoso di ko alam san papunta story neto. XD

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paranoiascreams January 9 2012, 18:58:22 UTC

you're welcome. i'll try updating soon~

kiraidesu January 9 2012, 04:54:00 UTC

It's a good one! rui is so...fragile while Tohya is so mature X3

Hope you can finish it well. Ganbatte! :)

But, to be honest I don't like the last sentence... TwT

paranoiascreams January 9 2012, 18:58:43 UTC

we'll see what happens soon~