Team Jon: A Calm Sea Does Not Make a Skilled Sailor

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Title: The Salty Sea Wench
Team: Jon
Prompt: A Calm Sea Does Not Make a Skilled Sailor
Rating: R
Warnings: Oral sex, boy kissing, slight angst, overusage of the F word (blame Gerard)
Pairing: Jon/Spencer, Ryan/Brendon
Summary: Jon is content with his job in the little coastal town with his regular customers and easy orders, but when a strange

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[nyquil_love]

So, this deserves so much more than this comment, but oh well.
You are my new favorite, mystery person, whoever you are.
\o/
This story was so amazing.
I can't even decide what I loved most about it. I suppose I will just say that I loved all the characters to death. They were each so unique but they totally worked well together as a group. I just loved the whole atmosphere that you created. I could completely picture this seaside tavern of sorts and all the characters that resided there and I could hear the wind blowing and the faint music playing and I feel like I've actually been there.
And, this story had my favorite quality in stories...wit. I love a person who can pull off witty dialogue and still have the characters remain true to themselves. I hope that makes sense. It's just that sometimes people write humorous dialogue and it's funny, but it doesn't seem like something that the characters would actually say. But you did it so perfectly. I especially loved the part where Ryan asked Brendon if he had a pen as a response to Brendon's randomness.

In conclusion, I love you and I love this story.
♥