The Day Disguises Fell (Ryden, Joncer)

May 30, 2009 12:13


Brendon wore tight jeans that weren’t pulled up all the way and a cheerleading shirt. He ran a hand though his perfect hair.

Ryan watched Brendon walk and sighed. Why did Brendon have to be straight?

A/N: Okay so I wrote this on a whim right after a pep rally at school. So I guess I should thank Paulina for inspiring the Senior Individual. Oh! and ( Read more... )

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intricate_life May 30 2009, 21:06:47 UTC
This was great. So unexpected that Brendon would actually kiss him so fast, I would've imagined it taking longer time but I like it, no dancing around the bush :)

And the ending line is perfect!

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panicatthecobra May 30 2009, 21:25:17 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad I surprised you. I think I surprised myself too. Thank you so much.

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blackstar147 June 9 2009, 18:29:15 UTC
Wow i love that!
reminds me slightly of Mean Girls... just with the way that the whole status thing is destroyed! (don't take that as an insult... idk if you like the film! it just came into my head)
Love your writing... it was amazing!!!
XD

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panicatthecobra June 16 2009, 11:58:08 UTC
Thanks! I love that movie but I never even thought of that parallel. Kudos to you.
Thanks so much.

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