Dustandroses--Lovely artwork and one my three choices. :) I like the emotion that this manip embraces and the different approaches that could be taken.
Michele659-I liked this take on what the manip could be saying. I liked how you wrote it blending their thoughts with the actions of the bus ride.
mswriter07 - thank you so much! I tried to leave it open to interpretation - there are so many directions that all three of them could have gone at this point, and I love reading post-Season Six stories, because it's so fascinating to see everyone's ideas. I'm glad you liked it! *g*
Ellu ellu - Good question! I always loved that little smile on his face as he left Oz behind. *g* Too bad we never got to find out where he went from here...
Hey March-thanks so much for reading and for those very nice comments! I actually didn't know you were a "slut" for anything I write,so that was a pleasant surprise. :)
Roguemarch - Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. The end of Season Six is filled with intense emotion, I'm so glad I was able to get that across to you in my art.
Thanks so much for reading and for your comments! I wasn't sure I was expressing their thoughts well enough,so it's good to know that it worked for you. :)
Luci 2 - Thank you. I'm glad that it worked so well for you. The emotions from this time in the season are so intense, I"m thrilled that you thought I captured them well.
Michele659 - Please forgive me for taking so long to respond. I was in the midst of moving, while still trying to recover from my carpal tunnel surgery, and I totally missed this being posted. I feel really bad about not commenting earlier. (I once had someone wait a month before they commented on a story I wrote for them in an SG-1 ficathon, and I thought they'd hated it so much they hadn't wanted to even acknowledge it - so I know how frustrating it can be.)
I'm thrilled that you liked this art enough to want to write for it, and I felt that you obviously understood the sense of loss and deep emotion that I was trying to portray. It was a time of emotional intensity for all three characters - a time of change, and maybe even a chance at a new beginning, and I got that from your story. Thank you for writing for me - good job!
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Michele659-I liked this take on what the manip could be saying. I liked how you wrote it blending their thoughts with the actions of the bus ride.
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michele659: some interesting perspectives that made me care more about the main characters than I usually do ;)
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Michele659: You know I'm a slut for anything you write. The raw emotion in this one is absolutelly fantastic.
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I actually didn't know you were a "slut" for anything I write,so that was a pleasant surprise. :)
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Michele659 - excellent portrait of of their thoughts, the sense of freedom and, for Ryan and Toby, the sense of loss.
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I'm thrilled that you liked this art enough to want to write for it, and I felt that you obviously understood the sense of loss and deep emotion that I was trying to portray. It was a time of emotional intensity for all three characters - a time of change, and maybe even a chance at a new beginning, and I got that from your story. Thank you for writing for me - good job!
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