Doctor Who fic: serpentine smile

[oxoniensis]

This was originally sparked by the Porn Battle X prompt: Amy Pond/Eleven/Vincent Van Gogh, paint. Somehow, instead of being a porny threesome, it turned into naked gen banter. Yeah. I've no idea either.

Title: serpentine smile
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Eleven, Amy, Vincent
Rating: PG
Word count: 3,047
Spoilers: Major spoilers for 5.10 -

Comments

[sangre_fria]

Awesome! I don't think I mentioned before, but this whole piece is so lovely!

[oxoniensis]

Thank *you* for offering/doing it! I seem to have added rather a lot after your notes

[tasty_kate]

GUH. The out-takes of this NEED to be written. hahaha

[oxoniensis]

Hee, it just really didn't want to go properly porny. But here's another silly little outtake.

"Doctor, if you could just-" Vincent handwaves vaguely in his direction, a motion that appears to suggest covering something up, and Amy peers around to see what the issue is. And sees it.

Ah. At least she's not the only one getting turned on. And she's lucky - it's nowhere near as obvious for her.

[tasty_kate]

HAHAH That outtake was bloody brilliant. But I get what you mean by not wanting to make it too porny- I've been doing that a lot with my fanfiction lately. :( I should change that... hahah

[oxoniensis]

Hee, glad you liked the outtake!

I must confess, I tend to veer away from the porny stuff most of the time. Or skim over it! *g*

[tasty_kate]

It's not everyone's taste so I can see why you would. : ) Thanks for indulging me a bit, though. hahaha

[oxoniensis]

Oh, I do love some good, hot porn sometimes. I just tend to want plot more often. Depends on my mood! *g*

[sangre_fria]

Ooh-la-la! Porn for the sake of art, eh? That's about as highbrow as it gets. ;P

Actually, that idea is really titillating. Amy and the Doctor exploring each other's bodies for the first time, while Vincent directs the proceedings from behind an easel.

It would probably the Doctor's first sexual experience in his new body, so he would be learning just as much about himself as he'd be learning about Amy. I'm sure that Amy has had some fantasies over the years about being with her raggedy Doctor, and it would be her chance to live them. And since Vincent's view of the world seems to vividly show the emotion or feelings in an image, I hardly think he would feel left out. That could be such an intensely intimate scene.

And this threesome clearly makes my mind start to wander in all sorts of directions, ha!

The flu is terrible, but your writing was an excellent palliative for my cabin fever; thank you!

[oxoniensis]

Porn for the sake of art, eh? That's about as highbrow as it gets. ;P

Pretty good excuse, especially said so guilelessly! *g*

I rather think you should write that scene - you've got it so clear in your head, how they'd all be feeling, that I think you could do something awesome with it.