Doctor Who fic: serpentine smile
This was originally sparked by the Porn Battle X prompt: Amy Pond/Eleven/Vincent Van Gogh, paint. Somehow, instead of being a porny threesome, it turned into naked gen banter. Yeah. I've no idea either.
Title: serpentine smile
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Eleven, Amy, Vincent
Rating: PG
Word count: 3,047
Spoilers: Major spoilers for 5.10 - ( Read more... )
Title: serpentine smile
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Eleven, Amy, Vincent
Rating: PG
Word count: 3,047
Spoilers: Major spoilers for 5.10 - ( Read more... )
And I'm glad you liked it, even if it did utterly fail on the porn side. Well, I did actually write a couple of moments later on in the painting scene, but deleted them when I got to a point that felt like a natural end. So as you wanted porn, a couple of teeny not-really-porny-but-heading-there out-takes for you.
The Doctor's thigh is between hers, and it shouldn't be an issue. This is a totally non-sexual situation, just two people - two naked people - modelling for an artist. People do it all the time, and no one gets turned on by it. Models don't rub up against each other and Amy isn't going to be the first.
"Almost perfect. Just move your hand a fraction, Doctor. To the left. A bit more. I need you to cup her breast. Yes. Stop, that's it."
Amy gulps. The Doctor's thumb is rubbing circles slowly on the underswell of her breast. He probably doesn't even know he's doing it. It's just a friendly act, and she wants more than anything to tell him to move his thumb up.
And Vincent being hilariously oblivious to what he's asking. Which is probably totally out of character, but I just imagined Amy's face when he asked this!
"I would love to paint the act of coitus. If you would be willing, that is. I understand it is an intensely private thing, but you would barely know I was there."
Hope you're feeling a bit better now!
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"Doctor, if you could just-" Vincent handwaves vaguely in his direction, a motion that appears to suggest covering something up, and Amy peers around to see what the issue is. And sees it.
Ah. At least she's not the only one getting turned on. And she's lucky - it's nowhere near as obvious for her.
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I must confess, I tend to veer away from the porny stuff most of the time. Or skim over it! *g*
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Actually, that idea is really titillating. Amy and the Doctor exploring each other's bodies for the first time, while Vincent directs the proceedings from behind an easel.
It would probably the Doctor's first sexual experience in his new body, so he would be learning just as much about himself as he'd be learning about Amy. I'm sure that Amy has had some fantasies over the years about being with her raggedy Doctor, and it would be her chance to live them. And since Vincent's view of the world seems to vividly show the emotion or feelings in an image, I hardly think he would feel left out. That could be such an intensely intimate scene.
And this threesome clearly makes my mind start to wander in all sorts of directions, ha!
The flu is terrible, but your writing was an excellent palliative for my cabin fever; thank you!
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Pretty good excuse, especially said so guilelessly! *g*
I rather think you should write that scene - you've got it so clear in your head, how they'd all be feeling, that I think you could do something awesome with it.
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