Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension)

Jan 13, 2008 16:44


Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the ( Read more... )

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Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon sparklebutch January 13 2008, 18:30:09 UTC
Faith is so different from Fred, Wesley thinks, looking at the slayer jumping over a fence in the moonlight. Faith's a predator. Fred can be tough, but she's never bloodthirsty. Faith is. Wesley knows.

Fred's trying to be friendly. Faith is being flirtatious, without trying too hard. The conversation between them was stuttered, awkward. Too many pauses. Too many times Fred smiled and tried to pretend Faith didn't just imply what she just did. Wesley watched them, teetering on the edge of tension, and didn't know if he wanted to rush in and protect Fred, or to stay back and... watch.

He went out into the night with Faith, and Fred stayed behind at the computer. Irrationally, he hated himself for it. It wasn't his choice to make, but it still felt like one. And now Faith's prowling in the darkness, him always a few steps behind, and he's looking at her leather jacket and the image in his mind is Fred in a light summer dress. Floral print, tiny flowers. He doesn't even know if she owns any such garment, but his brain doesn't seem to care.

Faith had hurt him more than he thought was humanly possible. Fred too, before they were together, but then she was soft, tender. He thinks about what Faith could do to Fred and his gut tightens, a pain rising in his throat, fear. He thinks about what Fred would do to Faith. For Faith. Be soft with her, tender. It's an insane thought and one he thinks he should shun. It's not an image he should entertain, he knows.

"I'll just pop in that alley, check it out, yeah?" Faith says. "You wait here. I'll shout if I need you."

He moves to the side of the building, waits for her in the shadows and she disappears in the night. He leans his head back against the cold, probably filthy wall.

He can see Fred's smile, like a soft, warm light. In his mind, she's wearing the same lipstick as Faith. He wonders what that would taste like on her. His hand strays to the front of his trousers. He tries not to think about Faith with her top off, shameless, proud of her breasts, strutting before him.

He tries not to think about Faith's breasts pressing against Fred's smaller ones. Tries not to think about her dark hair brushing over his girlfriend's face, shoulders. Tries very hard not to picture Faith sliding downwards, her lips, painted red, closing around Fred's small, pink nipple, Fred's gasp...

"Nothing there too," Faith says and he opens his eyes in shock and quickly moves his hand away and hopes she didn't see it. If she had, she makes no sign, has no sardonic comment for him. He's grateful for that, in a way. She continues down the street, a lone figure in dark clothes under the light of the full moon. He follows her, a few steps behind.

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Re: Man On A Mission, Disclaimer: sparklebutch January 13 2008, 18:35:24 UTC
I truly hope someone else will pick up this prompt and actually write the porn.

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon spiletta42 January 13 2008, 18:57:59 UTC
*applauds*

That was fantastic. I love the forbidden thoughts, and how this stays in character. Steamy and plausible, with great imagery.

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon sparklebutch January 13 2008, 19:19:12 UTC
Ooh, thank you muchly for the warm words. I shall cuddle with them at night. I'm glad it worked for you, I was a bit worried about the, you know, complete lack of actual porning. I did my best with Wesley's issues! :)

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon cadence_k January 13 2008, 20:45:36 UTC
I know this doesn't technically have porn but Wes imagining Faith and Fred together is as hot as any "real" action. I love how this is so obviously Wes's fantasy, complete with his issues with women and these two women in particular. Great job!

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon sparklebutch January 13 2008, 20:52:25 UTC
As long as it works for some people :)

Thank you. And, poor poor Wes.

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon kaizoku January 14 2008, 01:03:19 UTC
Really like this. I love that Wesley thinks of how Fred could help Faith. Also, hot!

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon sparklebutch January 14 2008, 09:07:35 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it :)

I think at the end of the day, the boy turned out to have quite a few good watcher traits.

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon romanyg January 17 2008, 18:15:06 UTC
Ooh, this is nice. I like that this is fantasy, unacted desire - so very Wesley.

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon sparklebutch January 17 2008, 18:18:28 UTC
Poor, poor Wesley, who REALLY deserves better than that.

Thank you :)

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon empressvesica January 21 2008, 16:06:59 UTC
Very nicely done.

I hope you don't mind if I include this on a master listing off all prompts with Faith to be posted over at facets_of_faith?

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon sparklebutch January 21 2008, 16:13:07 UTC
Thank you.

I don't mind. I made three Faith pieces in this round.

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon empressvesica January 22 2008, 01:25:36 UTC
I noticed. Nice work! :D

I'll make sure I catch all three.

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Re: Man On A Mission, Angel, Wesley/Faith/Fred, moon sparklebutch January 23 2008, 15:47:07 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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