U-Turn

[overlysmitten]

Title: U-Turn
Characters: Young Bae (Big Bang)
Notes: The things I do to carry through with my Big Bang ban. Serioiusly, I thought writing YB as this character would make me hate him, but it kinda makes me more in love with him. Yeah, I HAVE ISSUES, I KNOW.

Comments

[mintcake]

T.T wonderful story!!! It´s a litte weird so imagine YB as the dominant one or as the one who sleeps with random girls but it was good to see another characterisation of him.

Favourite line:
I felt like I was passing my sins over to her - infidelity, selfishness, lust - when my lips moved against hers. I was corrupting her and shedding the essence of her innocence away, and yet, I didn't want to stop.

[mintcake]

I agree. awesome line indeed.

it was funny how when I was reading this that the song suddenly started playing on my play list.

[overlysmitten]

=) Thank you!

Hah, same thing happened to me while I was writing it. XD

[overlysmitten]

Haha, yeahhh, I'm really used to seeing YB being this cute and innocent boy, but ... I just wanted to try a different character for him. But I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

[chupark]

.......o_o

i have a slight feeling that you sorta enjoyed writing this 8D; just cause it involved a YB.

i dont know why she left. i mean, he's so hot D:

GO DO HOMEWORK 8Dd

[overlysmitten]

LOLOLOL. OBV ANYTHING TO DO WITH YB I WOULD ENJOY? =)

I know. I mean, YB could cheat on me and I would still stay with him, as long as he gave me 45 babies. 8D

[comicbookending]

Thank you. Someone had to write a fic about Look Only At Me, and this is wonderful. I love how you never even named the girl, and how YB's feelings don't make sense but he just goes with them because it's what he feels. Augh.

I love that song so much. I was so sad when I found out he was actually the one being an ass in it and not the girl he was singing to, haha. And the characterization here is believable, because his demeanor is as sweet as it always is. It's just what he does to her that's different from what we usually see in fics with YB.

Great job. 8Db ♥

[overlysmitten]

Oh, I'm so glad that you noticed that I never named the girl. =)

And YES! I was *waiting* for someone to write a fic about this song, but ... no dice, so I thought I should put matters into my own hands, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. =)

Kyahh. You gave me such sweet comments, I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO REPLY? <333333

[cordiisvip3]

this was really good! it seemed so realistic, and i loved reading it. keep up the good work!

[overlysmitten]

Oh, you're too kind! Thanks for reading. =)