Her Rules

[outsidethebx]

Title: Her Rules
Author: Outsidethebx
Fandom: Scrubs
Pairing: Jordan/Elliot
Rating: NC-17 (sex)
Prompt: I wrote this for femslash_today, in response to The Porn Battle
AN: Beta by bank_farter and the prompt was Jordan/Elliot and "lick."
Archiving: Sure
Disclaimer: I have no ownership of Scrubs

Comments

[runetraverse]

*snicker* Holicrap, hot again. *dies* I love the whole "see, I matched too" from Elliot, it made me giggle. And oh look, Jordan the meanie is damned fun to read, as usual. xD

One mistake - Elliot sat down on the couch, and looked over at Jordan. “Would you quit being an evil monster and finish what you were staying?”

Saying doesn't have a t. *grin*

Yep, you're right! :)

[outsidethebx]

First of all, thanks for noticing the mistake. :) It's been changed.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Tonight, I sat down, without a plot in mind, and came up with this. So glad it worked it for you!

[ohmanhattan]

Elliot and Jordan will be my favorite femslash couple forever. Precisely for the hot fics like this! The problem with Alex/Olivia from SVU is eventually it starts to teeter into the OMG!RAINBOWS!PUPPIES!ADOPTION!SEX!BABIES!MARRIAGE!BUBBLES! territory.

Oh man, Jordan re: Elliot working at Applebees.

Elliot talking about her bra and how it matches during sex (random stupid personal note, once in the moment, I talked about like Boy Meets World or something. They just kinda..looked at me.. )

I like this because Jordan's actually not that domineering in this fic and you know she could really be, but she's almost kinda gentle here. In the way a bear is gentle with a meat sandwich.

“Stick, tonight, we’re playing by my rules.” Jordan took a sip of scotch and walked over toward Elliot. “Which means you have to be nice…” She sat down next to the doctor, and traced her fingers down Elliot’s arm. “…and I don’t.”

Elliot rolled her eyes and laughed. “…like that’s any different than normal.”
EXACTLY. Love it

Re: Your prompt

[outsidethebx]

I had no idea who's prompt I was answering, and actually figured it was bank_farter, until she told me otherwise.

I agree about the Olivia/Alex fandom teetering on the verge of domesticity. I'm not a fan of writing a pregnancy into anything remotely romantic, and I really never saw those two as the marrying type. Same with Jordan/Elliot. I think I would join Jordan in the inevitable "puking a little in the back of my mouth," if that fic was ever written. lol

So glad you liked it. I'm very much enjoying writing this pairing, at the moment, so hopefully, more ideas will come forth. :-D Thanks for commenting!

Re: Your prompt

[ohmanhattan]

I want to answer my own prompt "spank" but I feel that could be EVER SO HOT by somebody else so..maybe I'll answer one of bank_farter's

Re: Your prompt

[outsidethebx]

Yes, hot, but you should try it too. Even if someone else does it, each person has a different perspective. ;-)

[ralst]

I love Elliot's mid-sex babble. It's so cute.

[outsidethebx]

Thanks! *g* Glad you liked it.

[western_skies]

Gotta say, I'm still trying to decide how I feel about this pairing, but this was a hella fun read, and hot to boot. Nicely done! :)

[outsidethebx]

Well, if you enjoyed reading it, and thought it was hot, I count the fic as a success. :)I've written a couple Elliot/Jordan fics, so if you do decide to give them a shot, check them out. (or the elliot/jordan lj community)

That sounded way more like a commercial break than I intended. :) Thanks for commenting!

[xclairedelune]

I had read this a few days ago but just bot around to commenting..

it is super good.. (just to let you know!!!!)

The light humor interplayed with the really nice erotic sex is great. One plays nicely off the other...

Thanks....and sorry was so late in commenting...

Thank you!

[outsidethebx]

I'm glad you liked it! :)

Are you going to write a BG for the potting shed? I've got the plot laid out in my head...just need to find the time.