If you don’t love me, let me go. (4/?)

Jan 03, 2007 17:01

Title: If you don’t love me, let me go. (4 ( Read more... )

yaoi, yoomin, jaeho

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reunionstory January 3 2007, 23:25:55 UTC
“I didn’t even notice you.” I felt my face grow hot and I looked down.

“You were distracted.” Yah huh?!!? *laughs* ya think?

This chapter was a bit lighter, well there's still that tension but at least there was some communication, albeit brief, but it was there, and I think even though Yuchun is as elusive as ever, I think he's venturing out, even if just a little.

I liked the heart to heart talk with Jaejoong. It seemed Changmin felt a little better afterwards. There was some slight awkwardness, but when are these talks never awkward, right? ^_^

I love it! Especially the hallway kiss, rarw. I think you communicate it very well, the wanting to talk about it but there's so much distraction and something else (hot!) ends up happening.

Oo ooo! “Hyung… shush….no talkie.” Heehee WIN!

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onepairofpants January 3 2007, 23:48:53 UTC
It was a bit lighter wasn't it? Well, I wanted to have a little less angst. Too much is unhealthy. *nod* But... there will be more. >>

I'm glad you liked the kiss, I was.. and still am... worried about how that turned out. And of course the jae and min talk. ^^

thanks for reading and giving wonderful comments!!!

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reunionstory January 4 2007, 00:35:55 UTC
But... there will be more.

Oh, I don't mind at all! In fact, I welcome it! With happy arms~~~ *squishes ChunMin*

Please don't worry about the kiss, I actually had to re-read it several times just to make it seem longer. *laughs* DongBang kisses are love. ^_~

thanks for reading and giving wonderful comments!!!

Hey you make the dongbang fangirl in me happy, it's only polite to reciprocate. XD

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onepairofpants January 4 2007, 00:45:53 UTC
you reread it?! I do that too! I didn't think anyone would do that with my writing... *blush*

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miyun January 4 2007, 07:11:41 UTC
pfftXD It's well written, it's hot, I don't see why not. ^_~

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