first kiss (one shot)

[omo_its_mars]

Fandom: Big Bang
Pairing/Characters: GDYB (G-Dragon/Taeyang)
Rating: R (NC-17 if you're uptight)
Genre: Fluffy smut/Smutty fluff
Summary: Young Bae experiences his first kiss.
Author's Note: This is my first post so I'm nervous! I don't know what genre it would be...>.> It's kind of awkward... I don't know *kanyewestshrug*

Comments

[fantasyrocks13]

I love that last line. I was grinning, I'll admit. XD Silly YB.

And don't be nervous! This was really good! Love the boys' interaction with one another.

[omo_its_mars]

Ommogosh thank you! I'm so happy. ^A^ I'm glad you liked it.

[summanaro]

finally a good gdyb fic. I feel like this is a gift from heaven or something. ;;

the characterization is really spot on. jiyong being out-spoken and youngbae being reserved. you really do write them really well. and just.. the whole thing is well written. the transition from them sort of joking around to making out and groping each other was realistic and didn't seem forced. they just fell into the moment like you'd expect any teenager to.

also I LOVE the end. everyone tries to do the "I didn't know I was gay until you" cliche and I like how you exactly didn't go that route. it's nice to see something different. and it's not that I mind you going that route, but it's like if they decided to start dating in another part or something it wouldn't happen right away like it does in other fics, y'know?

augh, just, please write more gdyb. D:

[omo_its_mars]

^.^ Thanks. I'm glad you felt that way because you commented with everything I wanted readers to get from it. I'm so happy now! Thanks!

[yb_baby]

woa... a what a wonderfulr fic..

O so love the last line can't describe it..

thank you thank you so much for sharing ^^

[omo_its_mars]

Oh gawsh Thank you muchly and kindly! ^-^ I'm glad you liked it.

[vulgarchic]

This was just....perfect. Characterisation, tone, everything. I love how things just sort of..happened. It wasn't all mushy and lovey dovey but very realistic. Love the way you write!! I'd love to read more GDYB from you :)

[omo_its_mars]

Thanks for that. I hope to write more in the future.

[cosmoqueen2900]

Okay that was such an incredibly hot fic but that very last part had me laughing! LOL I really loved it.