Yabeki - chapter 11 part 1

[ohime_chan]

Title: Yabeki
Author: Ohimechan & Aiko
Pairing: Jin/Kazuya, Tomohisa/Kazuya, Ryo/Uchi, Shige/Koyama
Characters: X Group: Nishikido Ryo, Yamashita Tomohisa, Koyama Keiichiro, Kato Shigeaki. Y Group: Akanishi Jin, Kamenashi Kazuya, Tanaka Koki, Nakamaru Yuichi. Still in no group: Kusano Hironori.
Disclaimer: General Disclaimer and stuff.
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Comments

[didikoishi]

Wonderful chapter ♥___♥
They are meant for each other and being together they would get their happy ending!!!

Just a little note about these passage:
See, Tomohisa wasn't completely inexperienced - he didn't have nearly as much under his belt as Shige or Ryo, but he didn't compare in sheer virginal innocence to Kei either. He'd had girlfriends before, and a grand total of one boyfriend (he'd even forgotten the guy's name).
...
She'd walked in on things like this before (okay, once) and had just closed the door and left.

O_O I'm a litte confused because in chapter 6 you wrote Now that he thought about it, he'd practically had his first kiss stolen from him!, referring to the kiss they shared the day at karaoke. Didn't you?
I am sorry for being such a prick :p

Thank you for providing my everyday dosis of PiKame! ;D
(^3^) *chu*

[aikowritesfic]

By 'things like this' in that bit, I meant more the whole having another person in your bed sort of thing, y'know? Aaaand dating people doesn't necessarily mean you kiss them. XD Yay I am confusing~!

[didikoishi]

Thank you for the explanation *bows*
I like a lot how Tomohisa and Kazuya ended up to feel for each other in this fic. They are so in love! *melts dreamy*

[ohime_chan]

They are! ... *mutters something about chapter 20(? something like that)* please remind them~? ^^v

[didikoishi]

Uhn? I'll keep it in mind ;D